Reviews for Ron's Betrayal
carnival nightsteed chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Yeah, a similar story was done by i think whitem
Taechunsa chapter 1 . 8/26/2012

Man, Kim has a real problem with eating other people's nacos. First, she eats poor Felix's nacos when she is jelling over how much time Ron is spending with him and now she eats poor Ron's nacos.

Maybe they need to hold some sort of intervention for her. ;)

Excellent story. Very, very funny. Keep up the good work.
Pour Out My Heart chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Story is awesome.

I loved it.

RedBlueGreen chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Oh, the terrible angst. Well done.
D the Stampede chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
Except for Kim not liking Nacos, this could've happened on the show.
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Ron is SO the drama ninja when it comes to things like his Tex-Mex fixation! Brilliant stuff, I say!
Final-Fan chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
100% in character.
Drakonis Aurous chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Okay I held my breath until the very end and I exhaled a good loud laugh. Very nicely done.
theotherdave chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
never come between a man and his nacos
jiggermole chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
nice and so true to the characters.
Alex-Papa Storytime-Markov chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
I'm not even going to leave you a review of this one. Angst indeed.
tvfreak chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Not the Nacos, WHY THE NACOS!

Very funny, kind of korky but still funny!
Beastfire chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
surforst chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Lol and here I thought this was going to be another poor Ron story. Great one shot.
Jasminevr chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
This was hilarious! I love the parts 'All was right with the world again.' and 'She took away the one thing that made life worth living.' At first I thought it was really bad. But this is something that would be worthy to be in the TV show. Also how could Kim just take away his nacos! Such a tragedy like this has never been seen before. I saw in your reviews stuff like 'how could Ron forgive Kim?' Well she did say sorry and gave him money for a grande sized naco. Ron is such a good person.
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