|Reviews for Just to Be Better|
| Vivstar chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
Very good read. Jared Nomak is my favorite character from this series (strange, I know). You kept him in character very well, by the way. :)
| Punk19 chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I loved this story. You should write an entire story of Nomak.
| E.R.M. Griffin chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Wow, that was a really great piece :) Your characterization of Nomak and just the story in general was really great. Good job!
| HoveringthroughoutTime chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
Excellent. This is a great depiction of Nomak. I never thought he was a monster, as some stories portray him to be, but a tortured soul, as you portray him.
Poor baby just can't help himself.
Excellent characterization...but u can't have the rights to Nomak, cuz I want him...maybe we could share? :P
| Dark Gotham chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Rather nice and a bit longer then you're other stories to.