Reviews for Final shot
Tala Is Shining chapter 2 . 8/13/2005
this is soo cool to.

so begin a new story quik i cant just wait
Tala Is Shining chapter 1 . 8/13/2005

this is cool story yes
CherryApple Sweetness chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
heh at the dream hao seems like a kind person a little cause he gave Yoh a chance and the others were so MEAN!

others: we are not it was a dream!

us: how could you say such things!

others: we can't control our dreams you know!

us: fine

others: fine

us: FINE

others: (walks out irritated)

us: mwahahahaha don't worry your story was a lot better than our first fic... it was a disaster...
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 2 . 5/19/2005
Yoh! How could the others just betray him like that! Well, at least it was just a dream and the others were being unfair even in the dream.

Ren: I would never say that about Yoh! I care too, he helped so many times and look what Anna did. SHE betrayed him! Yoh, I would never say things like that.

Yoh: Really?

Ren: On my... pride as a Tao!

Yoh: Oh! I never thought you would do that!

Ren: I love you too much.

Yoh: Ren...
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
HUH? Those bad things were completely by accident! Yoh really cares and that punch never reached Lyserg! Geez, nobody's perfect, what did Yoh do to Anna then huh? Huh? Huh?

Ren: Calm down.

Bonnie: I'll calm down when I see some justice here!

Yoh: Ehh... Nantouka Naru, don't worry. Ren really does care.

Ren: Of course I care about Yoh! Otherwise I'd be the murderer.

Bonnie: Evil Zeke. Yoh did so many good things and every SUPPOSEDLY bad thing had a reason and looked bad on the outside! Yoh is not dead!