Reviews for Torrid
znadias24 chapter 9 . 7/4/2012
Lolly and Aina, Come back to us! We need to know what happens! :(
liba chapter 10 . 6/12/2012
Please update this is so interesting, i need to know what happens next.
Shane chapter 10 . 5/3/2011
I just hope both Suze and Slater both die.
I LV PAUL SLATER XXX chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
STUPID BLOODY SUZE !

I MEAN, WHAT DUMB-ASS WOULD CHOOSE JESSE OVER PAUL?

IDIOTIC SUZE !1

OH YEAH, ALMOST FORGOT TO SAY! GREAT STORY !
kimmi0490 chapter 10 . 10/8/2010
wow what a story. Cant wait for more! i really hope you update soon! D
MZC16 chapter 10 . 1/25/2010
A! cant believe you left it at that! you better update SOON!

love the story, its very extreme

just make it a happy ending

PLEASE.
Kou Shun'u chapter 10 . 1/16/2010
AH! its unfinished (no update in 3.5 years pretty much seals it) with most likely only one chapter left!

its past 3 am and i couldnt stop reading this- it was just so gripping and then write at that moment it ends!

*shock* *shock* *horror* *horror*
Kou Shun'u chapter 5 . 1/15/2010
nice to see paul's little brother mentioned. would like to see him make a cameo in the form of a phone call or something, hey even suze's bros , considering the number of years of maturing would do them. but this fic is relatively short so im not holding out.

love the fic so far though.
Kou Shun'u chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
oh good too see the kind of mediator fics i want. and written well to boot. i felt a bit shafted at the end of the books-felt it ended a book or two early and i definately wanted more paul. so yay, im getting it here.
doxophobia chapter 10 . 6/6/2009
Wow, four years already? Please continue with the story, you can't leave it hanging like that!
kasswrites chapter 10 . 5/27/2009
FOUR YEARS, LOLLY...and aina

FOUR YEARS!

*cries just a tiny bit*

Please update? PLEASE?

*says in a particularly whiny voice* "I WANT TORRID FINISHED!"

*sniffle*

...please?

xo
Ipshita chapter 10 . 11/21/2008
this had better not be the end otherwise i will kill you.

(u have to make her end up with jesse)
emomusickid chapter 10 . 10/29/2008
love the story update soon i have been waiting a year for u to update sorry that i didn't review sooner but i had a lot of work to do so please please update soon
Lily chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Ahh! I love this story!

You guys haven't touched this in a while though... [

Please update soon!
znadias24 chapter 10 . 3/17/2008
Suze's got some 'xplaining to do. But whoa, cruel irony killing Jesse after like only 8 years of life. You know I really don't now what Jesse's reaction would be to finding shehad an affair with Paul. Lookign forward to the next update :)

Zoe
327 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »