Reviews for The First Day Of School
Guest chapter 12 . 9/14/2002
your story is good. I really liked it. I think you should put one for Jun and Shin
Hopeful Writer chapter 12 . 3/10/2002
Ooh, me likes. I just have a question? Do you really think that Miyako doesn't like Cody? And Davis is really that wild (never mind, that's probably right)? But it was definitely cool. And very original. Well, §LaTa§ - HW
Bobei chapter 12 . 11/13/2001
Really cute. It's ADORABLE! But,why did you use Miyako and you didn't use Iori? I'm not trying to be an're a kickass writer,it just confuzzled me. o.o
kitty chapter 12 . 10/11/2001
make fics about jun, shin, and ryo! i find that improvised stories(ya know, the ones where you dont really know much about the main character beforehand) turn out more interesting. then again, thats just me _. i loved the 12 O.o fic i this series! so cute!
Shikou Yamitsuki chapter 12 . 10/10/2001
Shikou Yamitsuki chapter 1 . 10/9/2001
Kaelia chapter 12 . 7/23/2001
This is cool!
Izzychick chapter 12 . 6/11/2001
THIS STORY WAS SOOOOOO PRODIGIOUS! i look forward to reading more of your storys!
Izzychick chapter 4 . 6/11/2001
Izzychick chapter 3 . 6/11/2001
awwW! poor maaaaaatt!
Izzychick chapter 2 . 6/11/2001
awwww! poor joe!
Izzychick chapter 1 . 6/11/2001
CUTE! prodigious story! im definitly reading the other chapters!
the new child of light chapter 1 . 4/28/2001
Nice fic! My first day of kindergarten was most like Sora's, except my teacher was really nice.
rabbitears chapter 12 . 4/28/2001
I really liked it. I like Mariko. I know about her from "Love will never End".

I think that that was the title. Yes, you should write about their first days of school too. And yes, you should tie up a few things. It was an excellent fic. Long, but interesting and very good. Keep writing!

-rabbitears *r*
Selena Style chapter 12 . 4/21/2001
Yes, this is so cute. I would like to see a story surrounding Jun and/or Shin, or what about Sam/Osamu? Anyway, great job!
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