Reviews for Delicate Pieces
G chapter 6 . 3/27/2020
Oh man my heart, this was heart hurting in places but oh so perfect. Beautiful story thank you
fnfnztri chapter 6 . 6/11/2019
I love this story. You captured their love and fear so well there's nothing I can say that can express how much I love this story. The looming terror of the cancer being S4 adds this horror and tension and is done so well. The scenes between Lorelai and Emily were also so in character for when the story takes place.

I know it's been years but your Gilmore Girls stories are a high watermark.
Michellematej chapter 6 . 4/22/2018
So touching
Ecamacho86 chapter 6 . 1/20/2018
Wow. What a beautiful story. Your writing was just so great. Thank you
tinkrbell225 chapter 6 . 1/3/2017
i love this story soo much.
KnightInShiningFlannel chapter 6 . 10/28/2015
Wow, amazingly written! Very emotional. Believable to the point I can actually see every single word as a clear image being played out by our favorite couple.

Only thing I was a little confused by was why she said the name James? I just assumed it was one of her usual witty pop culture reference and referred to Luke? Lol hopefully.

Anyway awesome!
MysteriouslyCertainPeanut chapter 6 . 10/9/2015
Wow beautifully written. I'm so happy and sad.. Sappy?
UA chapter 6 . 1/1/2014
I'm a sucker for angst, and you write such good angst.


Another one of my fave GG fanfics.

Potterworm chapter 5 . 5/4/2009
Oh God, the image of Caroline sobbing is going to haunt more than just Lorelai. My whole heart ached for that poor woman.
calleighsthebest chapter 6 . 2/9/2009
amazing story!
italiax09 chapter 6 . 3/9/2008
Yay, so when Lorelai was looking down through that window, in the last chapter, she was really seeing her future. I had a feeling. ]

BTW why did Lorelai call him James?
italiax09 chapter 5 . 3/9/2008
He didn't die. ]

You have no idea how happy and relieved and hopeful I feel now.

Thank you!

And the baby died [

I had a feeling she was.

That was wicked sad.
italiax09 chapter 3 . 3/8/2008
Darn you. You made me cry.

I love :: And then his face grows serious and he says something that brings her crashing right back down to earth, to this room, to this very real moment: “I’m glad it’s me and not you.”

That made me start tearing up. Of course we all know Luke would rather have this disease kill him than her have to deal with it. But it breaks my heart all the same. Especially since he says he's "glad".

This was another part that hit me like a ton of bricks :: She wants to tell him she loves him, feels the words under her tongue. But she has the sudden notion that there is something about ‘I love you’ that can sound a lot like ‘goodbye.’

*sigh* It DOES sound like goodbye. I think what she said was much better.

btw . i think you're the first author who has actually made me CRY reading their fanfic. I've never done that before.
italiax09 chapter 2 . 3/8/2008
Awh wow. Sad.

My favorite part :: “I love you,” she repeated, softer this time. “This is our thing.”

That was GOOD.
italiax09 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I knew something was wrong by the time I got to :: "This shouldn’t be happening now, not when they were really starting to get it right."

But I thought it was Lorelai who was dying, not Luke.

But wow this was depressing.

Itz amazingly well written!

Itz pretty hard to find true talent on fanfiction, but I just found some. ]

VERY angsty. *sigh* Are you seriously gonna let Luke die?
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