|Reviews for The Journeyman Project|
| Xlempouras chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Hi there. I enjoyed your adaptation, however I should point out something:
You say 'NORAD VI in 2112 was where the Worldwide Unification Treaty was going to be signed'. This is wrong, since, as you mention later in the same paragraph, the Treaty was signed in Ghorbistan. NORAD VI was only the site from which the silos were launched, TO Ghorbistan. Hope you fix this point and make the story even better.
| Hannibal3125 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Interesting. Decently written.
Bio can't exist - ten years later (the second game), the encyclopedia states that no one has been confirmed to create an AI. Farnstein's project (Arthur) was dead when the station was officially discovered. hence, no AI until Arthur is brought back to 2329 for good.
Now, granted, I've not completely read the story; but I thought that should be pointed out (I must say, an AI would have made the first game even more entertaining)
| Bamboo-Marimba chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Ah, a Journeyman Project fic! Most unexpected, and a welcome addition to my 'Favourites' list!