Reviews for A Monumental Experience: Sasuke's First Sunburn
EbonyCaptain chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
haha, loved the story (and you note ;P)
i almost just favored and left...but your note convinced me otherwise.
great writing style- there are so many people that can't write with an easy rhythm, a good sentence structure and amusing dialogue.
whether or not you continue this with a sequel, i look forward to reading future writing by you :)
-EC
liekanime chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Nice it was so cute! You done a very good Job in writing this!
jessi chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Great story, I really liked it!
Banana Matriarch chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
LMAO, the curve of her foot, toe lol

do write more
baka chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
That. was. hilarious. Seriously.
UnfadedBeauty96 chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
awesome story
lovelyell chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
I have to say that sunburn is one of the last things i would think of that would hurt a ninja but you definatly pulled it off. Great story keep writing
shamitt chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
*giggles in excitement* I love the SasuSaku in this so much! I loved how you made Sasuke be like '*sigh* no no its Sakura' to him being like '*smirk* sakura is smexay ;)' keep up the good work! you should write more cute/short/silly oneshots! :D
SasuSaku15394 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
haha lolz sunburnt sasuke,id like to see that
gleekygeek chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
write more please..ima SasuxSaku fan :D
ShreddingRibbons chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
very cute, and it doesn't surprise me Sasuke got a sunburn, he's a klutx like that. Poor, sheltered Naruto, he doesn't have a clue. I bet kakashi's lovin' it though.
chiliperrypepper chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Hehe.. :) NICE!
deep-and-random chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
really good story- loved reading it XD
TrinityAngelX chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
LOL, omg xD that was too cute :3
sakurababy101 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
well i like it! do another one!
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