Oh! I loved it. I've always though Remus loved Lily, and I know it's not as if anybody has written about it, but your fic's really touchy. It's so sad, and yet so beautiful, like the story itself.

So, I have to thank you for writing such a good thing; I really liked it.

good read!

This made me sob pathetically, I'll be honest. Almost as good as You, which I have showed to all of my friends and they have all cried as well. And anyone with taste worries about the third side of the love triangle.

Oh, good god it'as sad. It's amazing, but I may be in a sour mood for the rest of the day. This is probably the best Lily/Remus I've read. Great job! Now I have to go read somthing light and happy, or I just may cry...

this was a great story. I've always wondered why all the marauders weren't in love with Lily, and kind of liked to believe that they were, so this story was a good read for me especially. Also, it gives a good view of Remus and James as well. While Remus will give up Lily because she sees she's happy with James, James kisses Lily while she's with Remus. It shows a side of James that I don't really like to believe is there, but I know is. And I think we all knew that remus was the better person. Anyway, great job! I loved it.

An heart breaking story. Loved it, but definitely not the right story to read when you feel despresed.

Poor Remus, good writing

Hey so I just found this story, even though now that I check I see that you wrote it over 2 years ago, I still just wanted to review and tell you how amazing this story is. I love the Remus/Lily/James stories. I got on fanfiction today looking for one and THIS IS IT. It is exactly was I was looking for. Great job.

I think I liked it...I'm fairly certain I liked it, actually.

I feel bad for Remus, almost, because, in the end, I still think James deserved her...even if I don't think she deserved him...but that's not the point, anyways, good job,

anu

Wow. Thats... wow. That's all I can say. Beautiful. I loved the bit about Remus and Lily, and how he was hopelessly in love with her. Good twist, and writing it from Remus's POV was even better. Love it! :)

Great writing. Lovely one shot. I loved the bits about Lily and James, too. Of course, how i love them so. :)

Great job! Keep up the great work!

Kait :)

Loved it!

*Tear* These are jsut so sad. I've got a Lily/Remus one as well, it's not a one shot, but it's still good, or at least I think so. It's so hard to write depressing stuff like this, isn't it?

I've just started reading Remus/Lily, this was so sweet. The agony of the emotion that is unrequited love...

I LOVE YOU REMUS!

*schnuggles sad Remmy*

Absolutely WONDERFUL STORY! :D

Great story! Sad, heart breaking, un-freaking-requited love. Doesn't it suck? But it was so good, I couldn't stop reading.

loved it! wow that was incredibly deep and depressing, and had a really poetic vibe to it. your an incredible writer! :)