|Reviews for Lullaby|
| MissyH316 chapter 41 . 3/10
Yes, Madame Giry, you must hurry - but I hope you don't kill the poor horse in the process!
| MissyH316 chapter 42 . 3/10
Well done; "M" rated but not too graphic. :)
| MissyH316 chapter 40 . 3/10
Well, I think Christine was definitely entitled to some Erik affection at this point. But what IS up with the photographs? At least they (apparently) weren't pornographic! lol
| MissyH316 chapter 38 . 3/10
I knew it; Emily is in the midst of strange and not-so-good bedfellows. Seems poor Meg has reason to be worried about Henry too; she just doesn't know it ...yet.
| MissyH316 chapter 37 . 3/10
I'm re-reading this story and remember parts about it but not all of it, so it's fun. :) One thing I will say though, is that while I understand that Christine wants Erik to be more affectionate to her, she is still very much a married woman with a husband who is suffering terribly from her loss - and understandably so.
Did anyone really expect Raoul to believe Christine (or anyone) over Phillipe, a man he's known all his life; a man who's probably been more like a father to him and a man for whom he respects but who also can still intimidate Raoul as a grown man himself. Yes, you've actually made me feel badly for Raoul, but in this case I think he's more of a sympathetic character than he's often portrayed.
You've done a great job making these characters more than one-dimensional, although we'll just go along with the notion that Phillipe is just a complete b***ard (in the figurative sense, anyway. lol)
My only suggestion overall is that you go back and clean up some of the spelling and grammar errors. As I said in another review, I'm an admitted "grammar nazi" and seeing some very obvious errors are just kinda jarring and shake my focus off the storyline for a bit.
But overall it's a great story; you're on my favorite author's list and I intend to keep you there! :-)
| Guest chapter 30 . 2/25
Colors are perfect
| sirensbane chapter 2 . 7/16/2014
I'm enjoying this story so far. I'm glad to see a strong Christine. One thing though: "it's" means "it is". "Its means belonging to it, which is what you used.
| aSqueeintheDistance chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
Wow i did not see that coming!
| phantoxicant chapter 63 . 6/11/2007
Beautiful story. Christine leaving when Erik was mortally wounded was a bit of a stretch for me and, I think, out of character. Otherwise everything worked. I have added you to my author alerts and look foward to reading more of your work.
| MJ MOD chapter 63 . 8/13/2006
Once again, Christine is there! I still don't like her. I don't care about her pain. I don't like her!
| MJ MOD chapter 60 . 8/13/2006
I had such hopes for Erik and Emily! No Christine in his life! Blech!
| MJ MOD chapter 59 . 8/13/2006
Oh, no! Not again!
| MJ MOD chapter 58 . 8/13/2006
Erik is sending Christine away. It's right and good for him that he does so. Goodbye Christine!
| MJ MOD chapter 57 . 8/13/2006
Ew, I'm thinking of the era's medical care and all that burned people needs! shudder!
| MJ MOD chapter 56 . 8/13/2006
Oohh, It's so beautiful! Henry's words to Erik: sing me a lullaby. Aww!