Reviews for A Good Officer
Myra chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
ok kinda short but its cute
TillyMe chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Nice!

:)
arwenbella chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
AW! Good traditional Royai fluff.
Kai Isolated chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
omg that is so sweet! XD

fav fav fav!
Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Aww! This is so cute it captures them perfectly, especially Riza- I love how you said she doesn't know how to be that gentle and stuff, but she's trying anyhow- it's so sweet!
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Sweet!

But I want more romance!
Han Ji Eun chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Great fanfic!
momiji-k chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
That was nice and sweet. What are the other promises, I wonder...
frouella chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
That is one of the smoothest fics I've ever read! The first line is a perfect lead-in - simple, elegant, and intriguing all at the same time. And while the story flows effortlessly by, you have Riza offer up these profoundly beautiful thoughts about Roy that just made my heart ache.

I've read quite a few stories on this site, and while some are pretty good, most of them (to be completely honest) make me cringe a bit. It's always such a great feeling when I find a story like this and I realize that I can trust the author to take me wherever it is they're going, because they have the skill to pull it off. I love this story more each time I read it; it's like a single, perfect pearl.
Tsuiraku Nami chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
that was kawii.
Mimi-san chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
T_T I'm in tears! What a beautiful one-shot! Like a sharp knife to the soul! So beautiful! Great job!
invisible johnny chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
beautiful one shot. i loved it and i love roy and riza!
timberwolff chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
aw! that was so cute! u r right, hawkeye doesn't strike me as the normal type of sensitive person either...
saffiremoon21 chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Ooh...I like this one too...You need to do more royai!
YunCyn chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Very nice. Language factor is a big plus, so is the theme. It's appealing to read and very Roy-Riza. I like the simplicity, straight forwardness of it. Thank you for a good read. _
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