|Reviews for Kim and Ron's Wedding|
| Stephen Cooper chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
This was a good story, but one major mistake. A Rabbi would have the wedding ceremony be more jewish in nature. The way you described the ceremony, you could very easily have substituted a priest in place of the Rabbi.
| Bluerose E. Apple chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
That was fun... LOL-ring a rose-sneaky! I'm sneaky with the "question" too.
| SHADOW DRAGON TWISTER chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I ONLY HAVE ONE WORD FOR THIS STORY AWESOME :)
| marlea chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
good story. but you made a mistake. it's kimmy-CUB not kimmy-CUP.
| Kid Eternity chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
This is really great.
| GuardianWulf chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
That was so sweet. But it was comfusing for me at times; I suggest that you try to indent.
| CheriBeri chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Whoa!THAT IS REALLY GOOD!
| Jamie-McFly chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Very cute... But you could have submitted the chapters seperately. And you need to make the paragraphs MUCH shorter. Whenever some one starts speaking, you make a new paragraph.
| Chibigal4 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Aw. That's so sweet. -_- Great Story.
| warprince2000 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)
| squirrelgirl85 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
All I can say is that I loved your story! It was just awesome!