Reviews for What She Can't Say
unknown chapter 44 . 11/17/2007
plz update soon
Danny-171984 chapter 18 . 11/16/2007
Best chapter ever! Well, this was definitely the best chapter SO FAR. I can't say it's the best since there is still so many chapter left. I'm so glad that they are back together again. So they finally let it all out and found peace of mind. I'm glad. The rings were a perfect touch. And now, for crying out loud, she said it. She finally said the 'L' word to Ron. Finally! It brings tears to my eyes, tears of joy and happiness! Well, i guess until another time. Keep on writing.

Danny-171984 chapter 17 . 11/16/2007
Kim should have cut his balls...seriously. I hate that jock. I hope he learn his lesson. And also, I hope that Kim starts getting hers gears together and figured out that she is been attack.

Danny-171984 chapter 16 . 11/15/2007
Finally Kim is coming to her senses. I hope things keep going well

Danny-171984 chapter 15 . 11/15/2007
You know what...I have gain GREAT amount of respect for Ms. Whitler...seriously. I thought that woman was 'cold' to the bone, but she is actually very...conservative. There is a difference. She definitely cares for the people around her...I think she might be a good 'girlfriend' for Barkin if I might suggest..if we are talking about pairing her with someone. But I also think that it's already to late for that since I'm trying to catch up all the work that you have done...

Danny-171984 chapter 14 . 11/15/2007 chaos...seriously. Poor Kim...She needs to 'find herself'. And because of her self-lost, it is affecting everyone. At least Ron's hope is our only hope for now (the reader's hope that is). It's really sad. As for Bonnie...I don't know what to say about her. She did mest up...big time, wtih no 'second chances' I hate her so much, and yet, now I pity her. At least we know that Rufus is still alive though. That actually brought tears to my eyes...our little naked friend is alive. I'm so glad! What will happen next...

Danny-171984 chapter 13 . 11/14/2007
That was a really psychological chapter. Going into 'Kim' and 'Bonnie's' mind to see whats going on was very touching. It was great how Felix was able to make Bonnie to 'open up.' The last part kind of scare me...who is this man that is cold set to accomplish his mission...weird. Well, until tomorrow when I have more time to read. Keep on writing.

Danny-171984 chapter 12 . 11/14/2007
I'm glad that Mrs.D.P was able to put some sense into Ron's mom, and I'm also glad that Ron also put some sense into her. Sigh...I hope Kim is found soon. The tension is killing me. As for BonBon, I hope she actually kills herself.

Danny-171984 chapter 11 . 11/14/2007
Wow...So The Drama...Really emotional. I hope Kim doesn't think like that much's a scare thought...death and all...
Danny-171984 chapter 10 . 11/14/2007
RON! NO! That bitch Bonnie will pay for sendig people after Ron. That sucks!

On another subject, it was nice of Ron to bring his teachers to talk to Mr.D.P so everything can be clear...seriously, the air/fog was too tense...
Danny-171984 chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
That bitch...I hate Bonnie with a passion...And Dr. D is so unstable...two personalities are very dangerous.

Danny-171984 chapter 8 . 11/14/2007
Danm it! Things aren't going to well. Wade and Rufus are out. Kim is depress, as do Ron. Shego and Bonnie seems to have join forces (most likely), and Kim's father is not helping Kim with her situation...Dr. D seems more menacing now a day...

Danny-171984 chapter 7 . 11/14/2007
That was definitely one of her worse day of Kim's life...Not only did it shatter his dreams, but our (readers) too...It's really sad. And Bonnie is becoming majorly evil...
Danny-171984 chapter 5 . 11/13/2007
Drakken is starting to scare me...seriously. And now he's giving Shego an scary assignment (to me, mostly).

Well, I'm glad that they are back together...eventhough there are still issues to be solved, but it's a start nonetheless. And I hate her in this story. I hate her so much. I just know that Shego and Bonnie are going to ally in order to bring Kim and Ron down...Sigh...Until next time when I have the time to keep reading.

Danny-171984 chapter 4 . 11/13/2007
Kim is pushing this relationship too fast. It even scare me. It's not that Kim is unattractive or just...not her to do that. And Shego and Bonnie are as evil as ever. And Dr. D...he is starting to freak me out...

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