|Reviews for My Slytherins|
| Claire-de-plume chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
I loved your story, I'm french and I would like translate your fiction :)
| Deer-Shifter chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Loved this. Beautifully done.
| P chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Amazing story! I love your perspective on this, it feels like it should have been in the book. Great work.
| MystiStar1 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I love this so much. Thank you for posting.
| WhyMustIWrite chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Wow, this was certainly thought-provoking. When reading the original Gryfindor scene, I wondered at how uncomfortable it would have been for certain fears to be exposed that were more complex than mummies or spiders. An abusive parent was the first thing that came to my mind, and I was glad that it was included here. The body image/eating disorder one really caught me by surprise. And then Blaise and the dark mark, and Draco with Voldemort... we can see that the Slytherin children have a lot to fear precisely because of their House's historical affiliation with the dark arts. I loved the way you showed Remus' compassion for these students, and his awarding them for standing up to protect one of their own. Remus would of course value such loyalty, and you showed that the slytherins are not simply evil. Snape's protectiveness, and his overall manner while interacting with Remus was a treat to read. For whatever reason, I was taken by the line: ""Very good," Snape said curtly, standing and ending our most civil conversation since, well, ever."
| tag.0 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
This is a wonderful story. I'm really glad I found it. It makes it a lot clearer that the Slytherins really are *people*, with their own fears and beliefs, and that they are still children. And children (with the *very* rare exception, and even that tends to be a result of severe abuse) are not evil.
| Crystal M. Key chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
That was very nice! Thanks!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Really nice piece. I love the closer look into the slytherins' lives and how compassionate Lupin is.
| Rosa Mundi chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
I love this. As far as I'm concerned, this in now part of canon.
| TheGingernut chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
This was really good. :)
| kopycat101 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
This was incredibly deep and well-written. You've got the fears to be rather realistic.
And Remus...Oh, Remus is so wonderfully in-canon. I love you for writing him so effectively, aaaaa ;w;
| rcampuzano chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
This was positively heart-breaking and beautifully written. Now I wish I could read more stories like this!
Thanks for sharing
| Sansonnette chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
really good, I liked blaise's fear of living falsely.
| PapillonMagique chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This was touching, many authors spend a lot of time portraying Slytherin as evil because it says so in the books. I enjoyed your boggart lesson it was good to see the Slytherin side of things.
| 5thmarauder94 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Hey, just wanted to say that I thought this story was really good! It was well written, a pleasure to read, and the ideas were original! I really like how you expanded on the characters, not just sticking to the future, like Zabini and his mark, but adding in extra things, like the basilisk and Pansy's weight fears...
All in all, a great read :)