|Reviews for Bat Tales: Another Promise|
| Deaths-Head chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
Talon, talon, talon... where do I start? lol Good work my friend as usual. Can't help but wonder who you'll have as Lex Luthor, Catwoman and the like. Heh, maybe a justice league type grouping later, with the rest of the Hinata Housers as heroes perhaps?
Keep up the good work!
| Sailor Enlil chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
Nice move there turning Shinobu into Robin, though I think she could have the potential to become Nightwing later on.
P.S. Really funny having Ryoga Hibiki wandering lost around the Batcave like that :D
| Dark Knight Gafgar chapter 2 . 6/29/2007
"I don’t think I’ve been that surprised ever since I walked in on Granny Hina and a girlfriend of hers…"
*manages to vomit and spontaneously combust at the same time*
| brindani chapter 2 . 5/17/2007
Oh, that was precious. Mutsumi the batwoman of Hinata with her plucky sidekick Keitaro Urimashi, the batboy. I can just imagine his expression at such a title. I doubt she would ever do something like that, the image of his face just kind of stuck in my mind at the thought.
There are far too few Mutsumi/Keitaro so I have to say you've done an excellent job with this one.
Great work so far,
| possom2009 chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Um... what happened to chapter 3 and 4?
| Shadowed-Moon2525 chapter 4 . 6/22/2005
I must say, this fic is very interesting, though flawed. You should use a spell-checker or have this fic beta'd or something. Also, it feels like Keitaro's part in this fic could be a separate fic in itself, but seeing as you're going for the "World's Finest" angle, I suggest that you change the title of this story.
| VoidHawk of The Phoenix Souls chapter 4 . 6/22/2005
You began this as a Batwoman story, being Mutsumi the main character...But I need to say, this has become MUCH more interesting now, depicting Urashima Keitaro as Superman!
His characterization is very interesting...And well done...His thoughts about the girls, his moral resolve against the insane atrocities the girls senselessly deploy against him (Despite loving Motoko, his thoughts are right...How she can consider herself honnored if she abuses of her powers against "defenseless" people, just due to her own prejudices...). His need of tunning down his powers to not hurt others is very well depicted...And his clumsiness just being there, but tempered by his mighty powers...Gee I am loving this...
and it is just my impression, or Sakata Kentaro will be Lex Luthor in the next chapters?
And one very sweet hint here (I JUST LOVED IT) ...So Shinobu is the same age as Keitaro?...and it seems he is not in love with the despised Naru...Hah...This is very interesting and promising...Though again I love Motoko and Kanako,I just love Shinobu as well, and MAYBE this will be a Shinobu/Keitaro pairing, as well as a AU story...being her the same age as Kei,and privy of his secret...
...Loving it so far...Does not really need to go back to the original plot...Use it on another story...Think that if you use Batwoman here it will be a bit too much, and the last scene with Mutsumi and Keitaro would not really fit, would it?
PLEASE do carry on...And lets see how this 20 years old Shinobu will affect SuperKeis life, as the other girls as well...
and a little thought of mine...Ahh, he could for once "delay" a little his movements...it would be so nice to see Narusegawa shatter her fist completely against his face...So sweetly painful for her...And he should teach Motoko her proper place, being young, and not even near as honnored as he is here...
And I hope to see Kanako soon...please let her be different from the assassin one you first introduced...Let her be the Kanako we love...or MAYBE SuperGirl...That would be super, specially for Naru...hehehehehehehe...
Hope for more upddates soon...
| F00l3Al2 chapter 4 . 6/21/2005
Please don't make Kentaro like Lex, he's cool right now.
| NefCanuck chapter 4 . 6/21/2005
Hrm, more "Keitaro as super powered dude" backstory, well done. But unless that bag Shinobu was carrying was lined in *lead* I can't see why Keitaro wasn't sick as soon as he came within range of Shinobu...
Awaiting next chapter eagerly
| Wonderbee31 chapter 4 . 6/21/2005
Wow! This was a fantastic entry, and it'll be fun to see how things progress from herE on out. It'll be interesting to see what happens with Keitaro and Shinobu, as well as what happens with Kentaro and Mutsumi. It looks like you don't have Keitaro being matched upo with Naru or Motoko, so it'll be interesting to see what happens next.
| Chris Oddland chapter 3 . 6/17/2005
Heh. Funny chapter _
It has a kind of Smallville feeling when reading it too. It was an interesting explanation of why Keitaro's invulnerable by making him a Kryptonian in your fic.
I wonder what would happen if either Seta or Kaolla Su got hold of some of these "rocks"?
| possom2009 chapter 3 . 6/17/2005
Truly,you are a great writer!
| mtgradwell chapter 3 . 6/16/2005
Brilliant! Now I want to know if Keitaro's clumsiness is just an act, like Clark's, or not. If not, it would be amazing to see the powers of Superman combined with the clumsiness of Keitaro. And Kanako as an assassin - yes, that definitely works. As for Mutsumi, she really does have hidden depths, doesn't she?
| VoidHawk of The Phoenix Souls chapter 3 . 6/16/2005
That last entry..creepy and true, isnt it...They are insane...Ah, maybe Naru is his Lex Luthor in panties and a lot of hair...just an idea here, ok.
Hey, this could also explain his clumsiness, as he needs to control his movements as to not break or over do things around...Cool.
Really interesting...please continue! Do not dare to stop now that you got our attention here...
...Ha...I know this is suposed to be a Mutsumi/Kei fic, but if you change your aim here, maybe Motoko could become Keis Louis Lane...Again just an idea...
Hey, and look I really liked the x-ray part when having hot systers around...I love Kanako! and by such comment she would have a chance with Kei...She is adopted after all!
Till soon I do hope!
| NefCanuck chapter 3 . 6/15/2005
-blinks- Keitaro as Superman instead of Robin? I suppose that could work, though somehow seeing Keitaro Urashima with the 'S' symbol on his chest is gonna take some getting used to I think ;)
But its so well written that I'm more than willing to suspend my disbelief even further to see how this plays out ;)