|Reviews for The Fall of Starscream|
| Vigatus chapter 7 . 8/30/2005
Starscream isn't having much luck is he?
| Stormsoul chapter 7 . 8/28/2005
Ow. Starscream got blasted- no real surprise there though. Like a law of physics. What goes up must come down. Megatron will invaribly shoot Starscream. Short, but manages to put in some detailing, like the use of ebony near the end. Just judging by the name, but is this the last chapter?
| Stormsoul chapter 2 . 8/18/2005
Ah! Cripes! I need to get busy!
Chapter two is short, but plot furthering, assuming thats a word. Decriptions of characters are nice, ends on an interesting note.
Chapter three, another short one but some nice word-work and motivating from Starscream trying to get the other two seekers on his side.
Chapter four, again good character work- easy enough to see why Screamer would be worried about Autobots showing up while they're going at such a slow pace. Um, a few minor spelling errors, nothing much though, just on the bits were S.S was thinking near the end. Thundercrackers getting doubtful too, I think.
Chapter five...Ah. Right. The other two arent interested and Screamers on his own again. Wonder whats in that cave?
Chapter six. And things look ready to be getting very nasty very quick! Bring on the confrontation!
Enjoyable little fic all in all. Just, as I said earlier, a few spelling mistakes. Doesn't subtract from the plotline.
| Vigatus chapter 6 . 8/16/2005
Looks like Starscream's days are numbered.
| Blackmoon chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
This is great, can't wait for the rest.
| Stormsoul chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Interesting start- a few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing big. Nice description of Starscream looking out for various allies, but by the looks of it this won't be very long, since Starscream's twisted evil scheme has been found out already- or is Soundwave going to be a naughty boy?
Just a thought, but if Starscreams gonna try and bump Soundwave off, he may want to try and do it from behind, since physically Soundwave is stronger. And he's got a concussion blaster, and his cassettes, and he's a telepath...hmm, I dont think poor old Screamer has much of a chance in that area, even if he is faster, do you?
| Vigatus chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Looks like Starscream is off to a terrible start with Soundwave already on the know.