Reviews for Concrete Rose
white pedal chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Poor Alister:( the war completely destroyed him, and it wasn't his fault that Mikey died, no one knew that the tank he was on was going to blow up and his brother would never blame him for something he couldn't control
Pearl of the Dark Age chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Great ending. It's unclear whether this takes place during Doom or after. Good one-shot, though.
yllom21 chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Very nice. The adjectives are good and your Alister was believable. The only thing wrong with it is the format. HOw come it only fits half of the pg? That made it difficult to read, but the story was still excellent!
LuckyLadybug chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Ohmygosh, I just love it! I think you portrayed him perfectly. I can just imagine him thinking things like this, and going back and forth between what's right and what's wrong. The only thing missing is some thoughts on what he thinks of Raphael and Valon. XD