Reviews for Anarkia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First off, you're French? I've been so enthralled by your story that any errors are more of the words chosen or missing than basic grammar. Next, congratulations on coming up with a reason for the first spell taught in transfiguration: a hair into a needle that is then safely destroyed after use! The planned petrification was also a good idea, but your set up of a favor owed was very interesting. So, sanctuary for his clan on his island? A half-human grandchild? He's already given them the daytime sun and the ability to enthrall wizards. You have left us in the air about the Horcruxes. Are there more? You could have weakened Voldemort more with the loss of his bond to Julian, but he seems no weaker or more insane than before. I especially like how the focus is from the dark side of the war and the masters and apprentice perspective. An intelligent and mature fan fiction. I can see where things are starting to get complex and complicated. If you come back to this, I would love to read it. Body going up in flame? The destruction of his doppelganger? The sword of Griffindor? Him killing Slytherin? The tower he builds as his redoubt/lair? Blood spilled through betrayal or an assassination attempt? The Nightshade network activating. And even more possibilities you may have already dreamed up. Sorry my only language is American English. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And what will happen when it turns out he is not Slytherin? Or have they already covered that contingency? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Sorcerer's are a special group of magic users and not just a curse word for wizards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely marvelous! Terrific characters, wonderful premise, intriguing plot, outstanding story telling and a pleasure to read. Judging from your Author Notes, your commitment to this writng project is not strong which is a shame as this story is excellent and deserving of your best efforts. You are an outstanding story teller, thank you for sharing this small portion of your delightful talents. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a nice surprise. After so long I didn't think I would see more. Thanks for this chapter and I hope you will update again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for posting this. I had been yearning for an update On this story from several years now. I hope that someday your Muse find you again and we'll see more to this tale is quite unique and intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what a blast from the past. Whether you start writing again or not i wish you well in your current endeavors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thi is soooo good I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Awesome story! I can only hope that you will one day find more inspiration for this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite a good fanfiction. A little complicated to read because of all the new names to remember, but great. Continu le bon boulot ;) Tchouss Xylion |
![]() ![]() ![]() So great to read another installment. Thanks! ANARKIA really is one of the best HP AU Fics I have ever read: original premise, compelling plot, sympathetic characters, rich & diverse cast of magical creatures (with developed personalities!?), complex magical theories, escalating tension, etc. While you may have moved on to other Writing Endeavors, I really hope that you will finish ANARKIA. One of the highest compliments that I can give an author is to tell them that years after I first read their unfinished tale, I have wondered what would in this poignant drama... Will Voldemort ensnare/trap/bind/cripple Julian Richards? What dastardly act will Dumbledore commit (for the greater good) to get control of this polarizing young man: Julian Richards? Will Muggles become aware of this tri-partite war amongst the Magicals? (Heretofore, muggles are treated as nameless/valueless pawns and canon fodder.) How will the Magicals react if they ever are allowed to sense the massive power behind Nightshades? (I could easily imagine the Alumni, directed/fueled by Nightshades' central core of Magic, voting unanimously to rescue Dux Julian Richards should he be compromised and thrice exposed.) Why are the Sorcerers not only hidden from Magical Society, but also erased from magical memory - powerful Enchantment? What's up with Mundungus Fletcher...? (Is Mundungus a failed Nightshades/sorcerer candidate?) There is one oddity in your plot premise - none of the JKR canon characters appear to have suffered any catastrophes by not having The Boy Who Lived attend Hogwarts. Ron is still a glory hound. Hermione is still a bossy, know-it-all. Neville still prefers plants to people? As currently written, you are implying that Harry Potter never really had any impact on his friends, teachers, et al. lives. His Saving-People habit was not necessary. How did Hermione escape the attack from the troll? Did the Flammels die b/c Voldemort absconded with the stone? How did Sirius get out of Azkaban? Is the basilisk still toaming under Hogwarts? Is Julian Richards trying to raise Atlantis to be the site for his sorcerer's seat? This unknown land mass - unknown to Muggles - could become a safe haven for any disenfranchised |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Harry wondered about his real identity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gawd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story and great job on the plot! |