Reviews for The Unexpected Surprise!
Guest chapter 16 . 4/29/2015
The end completely sucked! That's crazy you are a bad writer!
Guest chapter 16 . 11/21/2014
Why r they dead? How r theyy dead, why 16 yrs later. Im lost, this was terrible chapter
Beatrice1509 chapter 16 . 10/5/2014
I love it. I almost cried reading the funeral part. Wonderful story!
haileycandy27 chapter 12 . 8/13/2012
I play the Bassoon And my situation in band is exactly like you made BASOON ROCKS!
spike'smate chapter 16 . 8/23/2010
very very good story
spike'smate chapter 5 . 8/23/2010
wow buffy she really knows how to hurt spike doesnt she?

(judgging this from last paragraph)
George chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Try spelling DEFINITELY, it looks smarter than DEFIANTLY. DEFIANTLY is a word too but it makes no sense in your context. You did that in the previous chapter too, btw.

And another thing: Buffy does not curse so much in the TV series.
psychobabe8 chapter 16 . 2/9/2009
Brilliant story. Was a sad ending though.

Jenny :)
Serrafina chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Most surprises are unexpected. That's kind of the definition.
dazygrl chapter 16 . 1/15/2007
You had to go and give a sad ending didn't you... Anywho, I almost cried. Great story
koraLuv chapter 16 . 3/8/2006
this is cora i have an account now i love this story even though i have watched buffy like 3 times or so anyway later
Adversaria chapter 16 . 2/4/2006
epilogue is good! very good!
Jerrie Hooper chapter 16 . 1/17/2006
A nice little story but the spelling got a little creative.
bulmablue-eyes chapter 16 . 1/8/2006
AAH! Where's the baby? Is there a sequel with the baby in it?
Sarah Sidle chapter 16 . 12/20/2005
*burst into tears* You are amazing! And I haven't been reviewing... I feel so guilty. I remember most of the things of Harry Potter nature in our notes... and Dawn and you could be clones... so what that leaves me with is who is Ryan? Because he must be someone we know... *evil grin* anyway, I loved it. I don't even know the characters and I liked it. I have one nit-pick. You told us nothing about the baby, or who it belonged to. Is it a boy,or a girl? Now, you will have to tell me. and I will get annoyed. bummer. And wow, look, your first fic and it's finished, with 16 chapters. WOW. I still can't give the fanfic world more than a one-shot. You are amazing! Much love, Padme

P.S. It's agreed, we have to get Obi-Wan to read this. I bet he'll like it.
183 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »