|Reviews for Nothing Goes as Planned in the 'Verse|
| Jaycie Victory chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
Beautifully woven story.
| ForEver-A-DayDreamer chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
Continue ! Come on one more chapter ! Let him break the bloody rules !
| Hilary Parker chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
Amazing! Quite simply amazing! Very well written, and perfectly in character!
If I had one quibble, it would be that it's his father's words he's remembering, and to my mind at least, Jayne was raised by a rather gruff mother and likely didn't know who his father was. Doubt that's cannon of course, but just my take on the character so it's a very, very minor quibble, particularly since I can imagine his father's words here as hers very easily.
| hotforteacher3 chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
Seriously? You just LEFT it like that? Cmon this is one tasty fucker of a story! Please please PLEEEEEEZE come back and finish it! Hopefully happily, but I know a girl can only ask for so much... :)
| basaltone chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
This one has a touch of saddness to it, all that wanting and no fullfillment, neither physical, but more sadly, emotional. But that is how it would be with Jayne and River, wouldn't it.
| Little Nutsy chapter 2 . 5/29/2010
ooooo, how come i love this story. because it was great mate.
| Zabby chapter 2 . 12/6/2009
Okay, so I'm probably going to bug you with all these reviews, but you really are a fabulous writer. And man, I wish you had written more on this one. I love that it's from Jayne's prospective, that you hardly have any of River, though she permeates his thoughts. This is so great. Wonderful.
| SusanMarieS chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
your stories are very adictive. thanks so very much.
| Elliesmeow chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
Nice, very nice. Loved the description of how bad his yearning got before he made up the rules. Those by the way were a work of art. Great job.
| Sasusc chapter 2 . 1/8/2008
I don't see Jayne sticking to the rules too well. _ Loved it! Please continue this. I want to see the plans go out the window, and the rules broken.
| Green Owl chapter 2 . 11/5/2007
Moody, tense, angsty, perfect. Very, very well done. I love the line, "You don’t kiss a woman; it means emotional attachment, opens you up for hurt and pain." Just the perfect amount of cardio-indigestion for our man. Kudos!
| Riddick Fan chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
This is very interesting and wish to know how it will progress. Please update soon.
| colorguard06 chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
I hope update eventally because your writing really gets me hooked and I cant wait to see whats next
| JadedOne47 chapter 2 . 8/21/2007
You never updated.. and it was quite the interesting plot...
Any thoughts of going back to it?
| dancing-badly chapter 2 . 7/13/2006
I noticed you haven't updated in more than a year. I do so hope that you do, this is a fantastic beginning to a story. I've been looking for a good Jayne/River story for a few days now and this one is excellent. I want to see them break the rules...ALL the rules.