Reviews for Unspoken Memory
Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
That was really adorable :) They are so cute as little kids! I'M A HUGE FAN OF LITTLE KID LOVE! Great job!
Harp Strumming Choirboy chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
...

*clears throat*

ED AND WINRY, SITTIN' IN A TREE. K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
The Black Sheep Juri chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
that was so adorable! it makes me wonder if a couple of my friends have done something like that. it'd be so cute if they had! anyway i loved this.

inupup
koholint chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
This was really cute. You captured the moment perfectly!

Koholint
Midnight Moon chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Aw SO CUTE!
Chainless chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Hahaha, brilliant, I love it!
winryrockbell2 chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Wow! That was really good! So kawaii! They are such a cute couple, even at the age of 10! After reading more of your stories, i have to say, you are a brillant author! Have you ever written a story? One that isn't a fanfic, that the characters do belong to you? If you have, I would love to read it! Well, ttyl! Until next time!
Yeah this is deleted chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
I LOVED IT! XD
Eighth Deadly Sin chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
aw...

you should do a second chapter when they're older and remember that.

Sin
Goddess of Yesterday chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
*giggle* that was cute
Ceirwy chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Aww... what a cute memorie... I bet the two of them tried to supress that one later on... lol
xXxJazzy B. RealxXx chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, GOOD! I LOVED IT! That's so much sweeter than if they were to do that when they are teenaged. The little child kisses are more innocent and down right cute! I was giggling no-stop when I read everything about Ed/Winry! *sobs* I wish they'd have something like that in the show in their childhood past...

I was thinking of writing something like this (as a flashback or something), but that would probably be copying it or something for the child kiss thing, so I'm gonna have to dump that idea...damn, but that's okay. I think of something else I hope!

Hell I've read all your Edwin stories in one day! I loved them all! And I've gotta go back and review the others so they can be on my favs list! Could you read my FMA fic too? If you want to, but this was the cutest lil' fic ever! *tear* So adorable and innocent...*sniffle* Okay! Well! Favs! Keep up your good work!
MelodicCascade chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
kawaii! TOO KAWAII ::DIES::
wwwwwww chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Oh, that was so cute! I loved it! I like the little EdxWinry child fics. This is going in my favorites.
LadyRiona chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Kon'nichiwa! I think this is really cute! You did a very good job with them as little kids. I enjoyed it. _

LadyRiona
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