|Reviews for Forget Me Not|
| Puppkid chapter 16 . 11/30/2005
You're nearing 500 reviews, I see. Will likely pass that mark soon enough, with how well-written and thought out this fic seems to have been. Amazing job, I will definitely say.
I seem to find myself open to many odd pairings in these sort of fanfictions...I've certainly found that, to my original surprise. I'm glad that this way worked out nicely in the end, and it actually made plenty of sense!
That, and it's the first time I've ever read anything of the sort. It was highly entertaining (I mean that in the best way possible) to witness Hermione's first reactions to finding out that she was married to Snape, and it was also interesting watching the thing progress along (I liked how you spaced out one large memory along the chapters).
There were a few other points in the story that I enjoyed more than others. The orphanage comes to mind first, as it was in the later chapters. The scene with the dancing as well (I found her remarks right after hilarious). And: “Am I allowed to breathe?” she asked indignantly even as she settled back against his chest.
“If you must.”
“I’m afraid it’s essential.”
“As long as you’re not too loud about it then.”
Reread that part a few times, and still laughed each time along.
A real shame that she ended up as she did in the end, but she appears to still be happy. Who knows? Maybe it'll work out, since she is thinking along the lines that she still loves him, whereas originally it took him ages to gain that back - and in the process seemed to learn things, himself.
Hadn't originally suspected the culprit of the events (wouldn't want to spoil it for a reader reading the reviews!) - though, once I found out that it was who it was, I'm surprised I didn't realize it earlier, as it certainly seems to fit. Other people seemed too obvious, in my opinion.
| Madame Marie Sen chapter 16 . 11/29/2005
A perfect ending to this wonderful but depressing story. It brings tears to my eyes. So sad, but I am happy, too! I can't wait for your next work. It is probably would be as great as this fic... maybe better. I am so looking forward for your next story!
| Blue Drgnfly chapter 16 . 11/29/2005
I have been following this story since the beginning and have loved every minute of it. The ending was not what I was expecting - definitely not the canned happy ending most stories come with - and I'm both happy and sad for it.
The permanent memory loss is probably more realistic than miraculous recovery... and in a way it works best with the story. Severus has gained the most satisfying proof that Hermione loves him; she has lost everything - good memories, bad memories - and still loves him in a fundamental sort of way. As she said, "you make sense"... and to me, that oddly summed it up. They make sense, their love makes sense, and this ending makes sense.
So, while at first I was shocked and saddened by the ending I am glad it turned out this way. Besides, it's nice to read something different for a change!
Looking forward to the Epilogue
| sheoflittleimportance chapter 16 . 11/29/2005
WHAT!*falls off seat and watches libary fall apart*thats the end wow but you cant leave it there you really cant its too good!cant wait for your epoligue thingy lizx
| Satia chapter 16 . 11/28/2005
I loved this story, I really did... very well written, great character-play - but than I read the end - and I hate it. Sorry, but I really do. I hated it that much, that I didn't even got angry. It was just this: Oh, great, all for nothing. pf... It has been you who wrote this story - so it was you who robbed Severus from his wife. And this is not made better by giving him a "new" one.
Usually, when I don't like a story I simply do not write a review - but I loved this one, and so I have to write this. I am totally dissapointed from the end.
Please excuse my bad english, it is not my mothertongue, and I wrote this in a bad mood.
Thank you for writing this story, but I will be afraid to read another one from you
| Aristocratic Assassin chapter 16 . 11/27/2005
aw, that was to sweet, i can't belieave that was the end, i am glad that you are doing another chapter though, are they going to have another wedding, that would be a good way to start.
But otherwise nice story, nice plot,makes love altogether.
| Mirriam Q Webster chapter 16 . 11/27/2005
Aw! That was such an excellent story! I loved every minute of it! It's so sad that Hermione can't remember anything, but in a way maybe it's kinder than her only remembering part of her life, like in the beginning. Looking forward very much to the epilogue. Excellent work!
| thisaccounthasbeendeactivated chapter 16 . 11/27/2005
No! We can't have her lose her memory again! Poor Snape! Can't she just be pretending she has memory loss, but actually remembers everything? Please?
| prin69 chapter 16 . 11/27/2005
| SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 16 . 11/26/2005
Why'd you make it a permanent memory loss? That's so sad. Please update soon.
| Lady Laurelin Ancalimon chapter 16 . 11/26/2005
That was so sad and sweet at the same time. I'm glad that them permanent memory loss didn't make Hermione scared of everyone. I cannot wait for the epilogue to see how they handle learning everything again.
| e.danae chapter 16 . 11/26/2005
Courageous but truly enjoyable end of a wonderful story. Thank you for this extraordinary piece of writing art!
| Amr chapter 16 . 11/26/2005
Um, well, that was a little depressing. She's never going to remember, I gather from what you say in your author's note, which doesn't seem to make much sense. She remembered everything up to her sixth year (I think it was) after Moody's attack on her memory; why should stress make her forget more? And she recovered from stress-induced disorientation and regression before. I guess I just like happy endings.
| atlantel chapter 16 . 11/26/2005
Oh, this is a wonderful end. It is really the best one for this story. Really. That's full of promise. Finally, Hermione this time doesn't doubt about him nor Severus about his love for her.
Thanks for this little tale. I really enjoyed it.
| vegiegurl-too lazy to log in chapter 16 . 11/25/2005
Wow! Hard to believe it's over. I was enjoying it so much. _