|Reviews for Forget Me Not|
| MadelineZ chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I love your writing, and I would love to hear the rest of this story.
| Lady Laurelin Ancalimon chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I just recently started reading HP fanfict, and I must say, you are the best I have found so far. Too many of the people claiming to be writers are too immature to write anything worth reading. And they whole Hermione/Snape angle is fascinating to me. I've always secretly like Prof. Snape, and now I know I'm not alone! Please continue this story, if only for the new HP reader whose entirely too old to be reading this in the first place! :O)
I also beta for some writers out in FFLand. If you need any help, write to me. If you want to check out some of my previous work, go to the LOTR section and read "Boromir, Thou Shall Live" by pmochizuki. I'm her beta.
Can't wait until you continue this one!
| MIDNIGHT-PIXIE chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
well-it seems that u have already gotten many reviews. i love this story so far. u are a very good writer. this chapter has me on my toes, waiting to find out what is going to happen. i really do love it. please update soon. i am anxiously awaiting the update.
| EriksKitty chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
This is an interesting and unique start to the Severus/Hermione romance. Usually, when we start, the end is uncertain: will they get togther in the end or will they just piss each other off? Here, the answer is the start; they did get together and live happily ever after until...
The story is the until... and the rediscovery of why they ever got together in the first place. Will Harry and Ron be helping out or will they try to get Hermione to do for a second time what they probably didn't approve of the first time around?
~ Kitty -.-
| mugglegirl0908 chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
Oh this is looking so good! I really like this idea. I don't think I have ever seen a plot like this. Very, very original and well done. You should consider posting this on Ashwinder. It is a moderated site with (I'm sorry, but it's true) a higher quality of work than unmoderated sites (such as this one). This looks like it would definitely fit in there. The address is
If you've never heard of them, they are great, but they are pretty picky with grammar and everything.
Anyway, I will eagerly await the next chapter. This should prove to me a most interesting mystery and (hopefully) romance. Keep up the good work! Cheers! :-)
| Jasque chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Oh please do continue. The starting is already good and I believe that it has a potential to be better ).
| Sabra chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I love it so far, poor Sevrus! Update soon please:) -S
| MxSRose chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Lovely fic...eager to read more.
| Sabrina chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Great work so far. Please update asap!
| Satia Entreri chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Hey! YES I want to read the rest - AND I WANT IT NOW! I am quite sure, that your are not the first one with this idea - but I love the way, you are writing it and I am very curious, how this puzzle will be solved!
| sallene chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Very interesting start! I'm anxious to read more.
| kiki chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
in a word..."duh" of course i wanna read the rest! its REALLY good i love the way sev is portrayed in this one...deff go on
| lori chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
wow. this is great so far. i like the style you've taken with it. i haven't read one like this yet. so points for originality. please update soon.
| Cleo Starre chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Fascinating, and well written. I hope it doesn't take too long to update... I hate waiting! Keep going, please!
| thisaccounthasbeendeactivated chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
A few spelling mistakes...But overall, quite good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm a big fan of all your stories. Keep up the good work!