|Reviews for Dripping Water Haiku|
| Razvanor chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
I enjoyed this -immensely-. You have a writing style reminiscent of...someone who's name alludes me at this time.
I also loved the bittersweetness of it all.
Keep at it,
| J.L. Zielesch chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Finally! Some one else who shows a liking for haiku! Basho! Some knows about Basho! Whoo...I need to calm down. Okay, this seems to be a beautifully written piece of work. Until more chapters come along, that is all I can say. Oh yeah...translate this if you can. It's my favorite Haiku of all time.
Tabi ni yande
Yume wa kareno o
Or I could be nice and translate it myself...lol
On a journey, ailing-
My dreams roam about
Over a withered moor.
| Islaille chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Are you going to continue this story? Please, please do. I'm dying to read the next chapter! Bye!
| lolo popoki chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Interesting story so far! Very well written too; I love your detailed descriptions and comparisons of everything... Please keep up the good work; I'd like to see how this turns out!