This was well written. Painful, because of subject matter, but well written.

I hope you kept writing.

Awesome

Pete reminds me of Rodney McKay from Stargate Atlantis.

Haha, that was a great job offer...like how they both know what's going to happen.

Good fight scene, nice way to go into it too, with the slight blurriness and panic and the knowledge of what had to be done

Whoa, yet another twist though I agreed with Tony how the Lacher thing didn't really fit all that well.

I like how you built up all of the observations

Another nice bonding moment with Gibbs and Tony, I like how they can both see so much even without the details or history and understand, it's amazing.

Good for Tony to start the grieving process too

Glad he picked up on the job offer too

Whoa, epic Tony here.
I really enjoyed the repetition of the why use props line, really showed how Tony had things handled.

Nice development with the case too

Good job painting the autospy scene.

Whoa, huge twist there (for me at least)

Did Gibbs do something to get the guys to apologize or did they wise up?

Again, beautiful descriptions and phrasing.

Nice to see the offers of help Gibbs is making :) Glad to see he already cares

Love how Tony caught those details and glad I didn't fall for that (clever) red herring.
Still betting on the therapist doctor guy.

Glad Tony and Gibbs hashed it out some and Tony is starting to see that Gibbs recognizes his value

Whoa, lots of things happening here.

Tony is such a good guy, glad to see more of it in action.

Very descriptive language, nice imagery there

Poor Tony, already has his blame complex in action

Whoa, intensity is increasing, great pace for your story.

Cool to see how Dinozzo interacts with his co-workers.
Love his first meeting with Abby

Still betting on the doctor as the killer.