This is a good story, but very confusing. I still don't quite get it all, but I got the general idea. This is definitely not what I expected this story to be when I read the summery for the first story, I've never read anything like it.

Eh. Im undecided on how I feel about this story.
The story is so unclear in what exactly is happening that you have to clear it up in authors notes. For me, that really takes away from your writing.

Though you made sure to tag it as only mild romance, you make it most of the story without ever actually going into detail on the romance itself. Hermione/Sirius takes up the majority of your story, but it all just feels empty.

Yet it was enjoyable enough that I read the whole thing.

I've read this series before. Always gives me chills and doesn't leave my head for days. Fantastic story, absolutely love your writings. Hope your own work has gone well!

She said third, this is the third time she’s been around. I think? So that other voice…

Looooocket!

Please right a trilogy piece

the boys were adorable
and hermione's tearful mother squeezed my heart
and geronimo, lol, it's cute

hey, lovely. i love hermione's mom and i really appreciate crookshanks. he is very smart and fun to read

This is the second time I've read this series and I still dont think I understood half of it truly but its so compelling I just couldn't stop reading. No matter how confused I got I just couldn't stop reading because I knew you would clear it up - and you did - I think - but I'm still not sure I completely got everything. But honestly - I dont need to - the story on its own is incredible - I've never read anything like it - fanfiction or otherwise. And even though you did leave it kind of opened ended I also feel like you stopped it in the perfect place - it doesn't need those sequels you were talking about writing becuase its beautiful just as it is. Seriously - its amazing - I'll definately give it another re-read at some point becuase it deserves that at least and even though its been like 12 years since you wrote it I just felt like I couldn't not review it. Its brilliant - thank you.

Just did a re-read through this series & wanted to say thanks for writing, sharing, and keeping it posted.

SCREEEEAAMMM
that was so confusing and amazing im so utterly shook

This is one of the most convoluted plots I have ever read and I absolutely loved it.

Wow! This was an amazing story and I love the ending. I kinda feel bad for George and his unrequited love for Hermione because it was cute. So was Victor. I wish you had written another story after this but I also think you ended it at a good spot before it got to convoluted. I absolutely love the moments they kissed because of their realization of their feels coming to fruition. I also love how you redeemed Malfoy as I always felt Rowling did his character an injustice at the end. There are still a lot of holes as far as what happened the first and second time around in the 1st Hermione' timeline. It was sad that the only time that George had his feeling returned was through her and he couldn't even remember what had happened. I am curious to know what did happen back then and how everyone was affected, but I guess I can let my imagination fill in the blanks.
I do want to know what books you've written and where I can find it. I thoroughly enjoy your writing and hope to read more.
Thank you for this wonderful and sweet story.
A. A. Rei

I read both stories and they are amazing but I will admit to being confused at times regarding who was speaking and what was actually going on. maybe it will need a second read through but I love the idea, and can only hope for more clarification regarding... everything...

really loved this story! it got so much dept and was such a thrilling read! I hope there is a sequence?