yay! hes back!

yay finally

this chappy made me cry 2

omg this chap made me cry!

poor hermy

There are so many things I want to say, and I can't remember how to spell any of them. This is incredible and I really want to read your book.

I can't believe I never submitted a review to this awe-inspiring fanfiction... I feel so ashamed :(

I usually let the author know that her or his literary creation is on my 'favorite' list and that it is one of the best story on FFiction (which is true, even though I tend to have a couple of ''best story'' on my ever-growing 'favorite stories' list). But honestly, for this story that I read more than once ( I also read ''Lost and Found'' many many times ... ), I wanted to take the time to write a special review, in wich I could say that you are an inspiration and that your writing skills never cease to amaze me. The plot of your twisted timelines series is flawless and incredible. One could easily be addicted to your stories ... :P

Anyway, I just wanted to say that I highly respect you and that I wish I could really write the exact emotions and thoughts that I had while reading ''Out of time'', ''Shattered moments'' and your other SB/HG story ''Lost and foud'', but I doubt that would be possible.

I hope that someday you will come up with another Hermione/Sirius story...You would make one girl very pleased lol:D

x

I must say! You had me on an emotional rollercoaster ride this whole time. I swear that my heart was going to stop working completely several times throughout this whole story, and I daresay it's skipped more than a few beats by this point. This story was jsut...so absolutely and wonderfully perfect. I love how everything just sort of fit together at the end. It was nice that Hermione didn't die, and I literally smacked myself in the previous chapter when I realized that she had the Horcrux to save her from death.

It all began to make so much sense, and yet I know I shall have to go back to the previous story and look at things from there. Honestly, you're such awonderful writer, and you've gotten me interested in Quantum Physics and all these philosophical going ons. I truly truly enjoyed all those quotes at each chapter. I'm terribly glad too that I've read it jsut now, when it's over, otherwise I'd be going insane waiting for the next chapter of it. It was such a well story. It's sad about George. Though I WAs growing very frustrated in the latter parts. Parrtly because I wanted some SB/HG action, but also because things were getting so confusing that I was upset because I Wanted things to be solved! Terribly good at that, you are. You seem to have a knack for leaving your readers on edge.

I did very much like how Malfoy was portrayed, I think you kept him very true to the books. I'm more than glad that Dirius is alive, adn that he is free. This was such a wonderul AU because it brought to life all these little half thoughts thtat had formed in my head. Glad to know Hermione is 17, and I'll keep on day dreaming about her and Sirius being together. I'm sure there are many many more thing I've wanted to say, but I'm all a flutter just now with it being over. Wonderful, wonderful job. I'm so in love with it. I hope everything turned out well, and your novel gets published!

Ah, I do recall-I was terribly shocked about George making Hermione murder him. That would be awful, one hundred percent awful. But still, such a bloody brilliant work of art!

Always,

Lani

I heart this series. How many sequels will there be?

All your characterisation and plot and grammar and stuff is perfect, but the main reason I like it is because it's so addictive to read. Once you've started it, it's like a book you can't put down.

I love the quotes at the beginning of each chapter; speaking of which, I have one for you. It's from Doctor Who (you can get a lot of good time-related quotes from there):

"People assume that time is a strict progression from cause to effect, but actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly... timey-wimey... stuff." - The Doctor.

Just throwing it out there in case you wanted to use it.

A lot sneakier than the one where 'thrice defied him' turned out to be his tailor..

Thanks.

Oh my holy God, I didn't see that coming at all.

The horcrux thing.

This whole chapter was one big Oh My God.

I loved it.

Now that I have finally finished the saga, the first thing that I can think is.. wow. It's sad, and I almost can't imagine Hermione's and Sirius's future, in this story. I'm tempted to hunt for more HGSB fics now, since your story is so *amazing* that I can't help but want more, dammit. *cries* I think I Believe in the pairing now (I mean, I knew it was possible.. and now I very much think it is), and now, of course, I feel an even further disenchantment with the Books. GAh! XD I'm partial to Snape-Hermione myself, so it was really, really hard to see him die in the 7th book.

But as I was saying, this fic is amazing. The writing is beautiful, and the plot is one of the best I have seen so far, the characterization is great.. I had a feeling you were getting a tad into the OMGISEEPPLDYING thing a bit, not to mention how it, as a whole, seems so awfully *dramatic.* Looking back, it could almost be a bad thing, but at the same time, it was such a good read that it didn't bother me too much. Though at times I was pretty confused. I forget where, my head is hurting at the moment...

And now I have a whole new perception of time, except of course, time has always been linear for me, so it's not like I could suddenly pull out a timeturner and change the past to change the future like Hermione does. Which is disappointing, but I suppose that once the trauma and angst and beautiful, beautiful despair of this fic fades, I might be able to see it that way again. BAH PHYSICS. xD (Well, actually not bah, since in some ways it's pretty interesting. I just wish I could understand the interesting parts, though. xD)

I love the first part of this chapter. I've been staring at it for a while, and it just sounds so lovely in my head, like a little piece of poetry that you run your tongue over, a piece of candy. Or something sweet and fitting together without a single break.

XD I still don't quite understand a lot of stuff, like I said earlier (*bonks head against a wall*) I wish you could have explained or described things a little more in the fic, because maybe that would have made it easier. Then again, my friends call me stupid (and they're my friends TT_TT XD), and I know that I have the analyzing capabilities of a hamster. So I guess the Powers that Be decided that I shouldn't understand a lot of things at all, which is some ways bliss and hell. Like, I was thinking, maybe describe the voices more, or show more scenes of Hermione in class with the voices coming through. Or even the prophecy, before-hand, as it seems a bit unexpected, and like, HUh? She's going to save the world now? XD;

But then again, hamster. XD;; Unlike some of the reviewers you mentioned, I don't think foreshadowing would touch my radar.

I love the quotes. Where did you find them?

Actually, maybe I should ask you for your writing talent in general. XD And don't let those publisher-corporates deter you! I'd love to see a novel of yours (and would probably buy it, too :P), so don't give up! XD *hugs* The path of a writer is long and arduous, but the products of it are so worth it, especially in your case. *huggles*

I love this story-I think the experience of reading this, and the things expressed in it, have to some extent changed the way I view the world. It's hard to explain, but it's there. XD; Maybe it's just that now I see Hermione as the most amazing material for angst, or that time has become such a fearful and unrelenting thing, and that I can't still put my mind past this horribly bittersweet, though so abrupt, ending. And now, I am going to do my hw (which you have prevented me from concentrating on, for so long! Shame! XD :P). And then, maybe I'll find a SBHG fic, and brood over it. And then, in the future, I think I'll come back to this and brood over it once again, too.

Firstly, thank you so much for this story! I adore Malfoy and you managed the Sirius/Hermione thing quite well.

*Loved* the part with his hands in her hair. I wish it was legal to publish fanfic because this would be so amazing in novel format.

Have I told you how awesome you are? Hands down, the best HP fanfic writer I've come across.