Reviews for Shattered Moments
jayley chapter 16 . 2/2/2007
so close to discussing harry, yet not quite!ugh!
jayley chapter 15 . 2/2/2007
really now, 14 to 15 isn't that different. her hair is still gonna be all bushy! i'm pretty certain u have this as a h/s,or slight h/s, which kinda makes me wonder why i just have to read it, especially considering that that pairing has too much of an age difference...or is it just that there is gonna be tesion between the two for like all of the stories? either way, interesting
jayley chapter 13 . 2/2/2007
he wearing his mum's necklace!
jayley chapter 6 . 2/2/2007
...u know, it is kinda weird that he's old enough to be her dad...is in fact harry's wizard guardian and godfather...i must say, if they got together, i think i'd have to consider sirius as a super pervert and cradle robber...hermione's crush is reasonable, but if u think about it, sirius returning it would be a little sick, wouldn't it? that's why for H/S to work she has to go back in time first and fall for him then...or course, maybe htis romance is with somebody like george or krum
jayley chapter 4 . 2/2/2007
seriously, when does harry find out? sirius totally concerns him, and he can keep a secret! my reviews will probably have the exact same question in them until harry finds out the truth...funny really, considering this story is already complete...
whispere chapter 36 . 1/26/2007
Oh, Jesus. That was a truly wonderful story. It IS a wonderful story. I mean it. If you ever get something published one day, send me your name and perhaps the title of your book; I'll be sure to buy it. :)

Wow, the ending... Really. It was pretty, angsty, and scared me all at once. Sirius, the Chosen One? I swear, my heart nearly stopped just then. I don't think Hermoine is overanalyzing, though, because otherwise there probably wouldn't have been a need for her to voice these newfound suspicions. I know things have gotten quite a bit more complicated now. Are you planning on continuing this series? I'm not sure I'll be able to read your continuations if you are, you know; there's only so much angst a girl can take. I cried my eyes out for this story, so I should know. :) :)

Thank you so much for writing this. Don't forget fanfiction writing when you're rich and famous, and really, don't forget fanfiction, period.
whispere chapter 34 . 1/26/2007
NO.
whispere chapter 30 . 1/26/2007
Wow. You know, if confundus charms were real, I reckon I feel like I've just been hit with one. This certainly isn't the first time, either. The story's rather confusing. I have my hopes set on the confusion getting cleared up eventually.
whispere chapter 27 . 1/26/2007
You know, I really love this story. It's amazing. The prequel was just as good. I adore the way you write; very emotionally. I get drawn in every chapter. I love it.
mynightshining chapter 36 . 1/24/2007
I have no words. It's so good. I can't possibly begin to tell you how much this fic has effected me. I've laughed so hard I've cried, I've cried so hard I've laughed. This world that you've created is breath taking, wholly wonderful and mind boggling to no end. I'll have to read this all again, because it has got to be the best Harry Potter continuation/AU I've ever read, and because I love it. Thank you. Thank you so much for giving us this gift. You've really made my reading experince worth while.

Wonderful. Simply wonderful!

Peace.

Raye-Rei
Jellyjade Bean chapter 31 . 1/19/2007
Soory, probably reviewed already- but Harry and Ron aren't trying to kill Sirius. When were they informed of his innocence? I reread this- no matter what, it's superb writing, but the plot is confusing! Maybe I'm just an idiot? Oh, I hope not. That would be an awful revelation- the inexorable fact would haunt me forever.

Can you help me out here?
BlueSea14 chapter 36 . 1/16/2007
This is very interesting. I like the way it is going. You are continuing this, right?
jaddybabby chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
wow!
PadfootsMine chapter 36 . 1/15/2007
wow. that was great. i just read the last chapters and i have to say you have amazed me yet again. sorry i have not reviewed in awhile. i havent been on fanfiction in awhile. when i saw you had updated i just for joy quite a bit. i loved this story and it now all makes sense. it was great! i have read many of your stories and i have to say you are 1 of my favorite writers on this site. i look foward to your next story and i have to say im sad this one has come to an end. you are very talented person and i hope you go far with your novel and with your comic! post the news when you get published like i am sure you will!
dauby chapter 36 . 1/15/2007
I really love this series and it's great that you found the time to finish it between college and your novel and comic, I couldn't have done it. Great story.

-dauby
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