wow! i very much love this story! no matter how lost i may be it is still completely wonderful! i cannot wait until u update again! i luve this story a hell of a lot. cant wait till the next chapter!

brilliant, as usual. You always make me cry with the ending! (sobs quietly). Do you have a tissue? (sniffles). i think i keep reading though, because although i don't like sad stuffs (for the most part), it is a sort of addictive writting where one stays to watch what will happen next because it is simply to REAL to be ignored, and so powerfully written that one loves it, despite whatever sadness it inflicts. so, congratulations, you've officially made me (not only reivew, but also) talk ...erm...write...like this. I love your story, please update soon!

till laters :

Wings

Wow, long story! You kept me up til 3:00 last night.

I'm not very good at writing reviews, because I mostly just gush about how much I loved the story XD; I really enjoyed Out of Time, but the story seems to drag alot in this sequel. Thankfully it seems to be picking up, so I'll be looking forward to any updates.

This is just be my opinion, but as the story gets darker you seem to be getting farther and farther away from the characters. I understand that the style of writing you're using is necessary to reveal the plot, but be careful of not becoming too impersonal with the characters. ]

Thanks for a great story!

yay, new chapter! interesting. you brought horcuxes into it. how this ties in, I'm not sure. (must reread it, I suppose.) poor future george. i know this review sounds rather stupid after my last one, but hey, I claim tiredness and the excuse that it is summer - my brain is on vacation in the bahamas right now and cannot be reached for comment. I, on the other hand, am still stuck in my badly air-conditioned room.

You updated!

*jumps around cheering like a maniac*

Yay yay yay yay...

You know, in some ways, this is better than a Harry Potter book...

*loves everything you write completely and totally*

*builds a shrine dedicated to your writings*

I LOVE THIS STORY! *behaves more maniacally than ever before*

No matter how incredibly sad it is... poor George... Poor 'Mione... Poor everyone. This story is, in all ways, very similar, and yet very different from the Harry Potter books. It makes you love the characters in the same way, it makes you hate them the same way, but it is infinately darker, and, obviously, has about the most different plotline anyone could come up with.

I may have said this before, but I have printed out every page of this and bound it up in a binder. I am currently lending to everyone I know, forcing them to read the first page.

Unfortunately, after doing that, I never get it back until they're done. I've become very used to them yelling at me, demanding more.

I'm going to throw a party in celebratin of the update.

You asked me if this made sense- and totally, yes it did. Fab-U-lous! I read it three times, and each time, I appreciated something new in it. Considering the intense science, and I suppose pseudo-psychology, behind exploring an Event Horizon, you depicted it beautifully.

Right, so I'll prolly catch you on trillian later, but until then, your novel is doing good things elsewhere as well. Chuce!

one word. wow. i ahve been loggin on almost everyday to see if you have updated. you can only imgaine how overjoyed i was to see a new chapter. ok so maybe i was quite confused with it. but then again i'm normally confused with every chapter. but once i re-read it and read the following chapter...i'm sure it will make more sense. but i have to say, you are an amazing writer. truly, you are. i can't wait to read the next chapter. i hope it comes out soon. oh an by the way, good luck on your novel. brilliant. update soon.

YAy! Yay! YaY!

Can't WAIT 'till your next chapter.

Really, really want to see what's going on with Malfoy- what does the letter say?

Revelation about George was... wow. Really stunning. (I had a long and complicated theory where he fed her a love potion to keep her safe and in Hogwarts and that was why Harry died. But yours is a LOT better.)

Did he use the imperious curse to make her kill him and do the spell? (I don't think anything less would have worked, it is Hermione we're talking about.)

But I do wonder if Voldemort would be able to tell that the Timeturner is a Horcrux. Or Dumbledore. Or the Ministry, if they try to take it back. Yech.

No wonder its HG/SB- after this revelation, he looks to be the only fellow who won't run screaming from the room if she tells him about herself. (Well, not really, but still...)

I wonder what happened to Ron and Professor Lupin in the "future"? I mean, all the friends with the ability to prevent Hermione's soul being ripped in two are either dead (Harry, Sirius) or have turned out to be bastards (George, Dumbledore.)

So... if we're following HBP, Snape is evil, right? Right? (I have a feeling you're not going to answer that one...)

And I wonder when Harry will find out... well, anything. I don't blame you, though- you've packed an insane amount of important plot points.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Yay. an update. finally. who. wow everything is becoming so confusing. So basically Hermione made a horcrux of herself and went back in time. but before she went back in time George wanted her reasearch about horcruxes for Fred? who's dead? and so when Hermione did go back in time she only had half a soul left which she put in the time-turner so the current Hermione has a soul and a half instead of just a soul? I'm so confused. Wow. This is the most complicated story I've ever read. no doubt about it. I don't get any of this.

Bloody Hell, that was confusing.

Wow...the only thing i really comprehened was the kiss. It was painful for me to read that kiss, because i've been wanting Sirius and Hermione to get together since the begening of the last fic till now.

I'm not sure what the hells going on but somehow through all the insanity Hermione and Sirius will find eachother...at least i hope so anyway.

My god, I think I may be in love. You have no idea how long I've looked for a Hermione story that doesn't have her looking like an idiot. Then, you add a time-turner (without going over into the cliches) and a long _sequel_.

Seriously, I must thank you.

Puzzling out the physics of time also makes my head twinge, so I'm glad you did it for me. Sorta.

That last bit, at the end, Future Canon Hermione (or what I've come to think of her as) was talking about Sirius, wasn't she? You mentioned way earlier that Snape and Sirius had memories in Dumbledore's Pensieve. She fell in love with a dead man, then said fuck it, this timeline's not that great anyways, and figured out a way to change it. Right?

Dumbledore is a bastard. I'd clap, except I'm supposed to empathize with Hermione and Sirius, and applauding someone who's manipulating them like toy soldier's somewhat wrong, morally wise. [I almost said like chess pieces, but that's a bit cliched.] By the way, what _did_ Dumbledore say to Hermione in there? Or is it that she (splinched Hermione) is pissed off at what happened in her timeline?

God, I don't know how you manage to write with all these time conundrums. I believe I mentioned it above how much that makes me want to knock my head against something solid?

I almost feel sorry for poor George. Those darn dimensions, always switching around on you. Just when you think you've got lines pined, they change and suddenly you've got a cube on your hands. And those super cubes that can't quite be rendered accurately due to their nature ad 4-D bastards are even worse. [I had a classmate who was obsessed with the forth dimension and I was the only one who looked mildly interested/understood a teensy bit.]

I know you just updated, and I'm not whining, but I can't wait to see this story arc out. Any guesses as to how many chapters this baby'll take? Thanks again.

I may be ever slightly confused about what's happening but this story still rocks! please update soon

So I have no idea what happened there... poor Hermione... I so want her and George to work out, somehow..

...Wait, what?