Reviews for Shattered Moments |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful chapter! I'm really glad that Sirius is finally back! w00t! The Yule Ball will certainly be a chapter to look forward to! I bet that if Viktor doesn't ask Hermione, then George will! That would definetly be cute! Maybe even a little jealousy from Sirius after he sees her in her knock-out dress robes! Huzzah! Oh, and I feel you about school. It gets to the best of us. ;_; Anyway, once again, wonderful chapter, and I look forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your fic. please continue writing |
![]() ![]() Fantastic. I really enjoy your writing style - not too heavy, very clean and easy to read - and I'm enjoying the plot. If you've already said, I apologize, but how old is Hermione, exactly? She'd naturally be 15 this year, but with all the napping and studying time she took with the time turner last year, is she 16? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfection. That's really all I have to say, other than your Sirius is amazing and the Sirius/Hermione interaction is fantastic. I feel somewhat sorry for George, though not too much. . Anyway, thanks for updating! I was cheered when I saw it had been updated. I adore this fic. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant. Superb. So sweet. Sirius is back, and Hermione is tending his wounds. Classic. And I swear George was going to ask her to the ball. My brain has turned to mush in awe (as sometimes happens when I read romance stuff.) Please try to update soon, and I'm hoping to see some of that nice Sirius POV. Thank you, thank you, thank you for a wonderful chapter! |
![]() ![]() SIRIUS IS BACK! SIRIUS IS BACK! SIRIUS IS BACK! i am so happy. it has been too long without him. please update soon. im looking foward to when hermione yells at him. i think ill find that funny. i liked how sirius just started to laugh. that was auwsome. i really am wondering who hermiones going to go to the ball with. one of the twins? krum? dont keep us waiting! wow, your alreadly starting school? its kinda early, isnt it? anywho, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() {“I’m doomed,” he muttered. Hermione’s eyebrow twitched. “And why is that?” she asked him. Other than the fact that you’re supposed to be dead in a few years time, why don’t you worry about more important things, damn it-} _ nice. so sirius is back, eh? and just who will hermione go to the ball with? will george ask in time and if so how will ron react? or will she go with krum so that once again she will be held under the hogwarts lake? |
![]() ![]() ![]() woo, mama, that was brilliant. I'm hooked. I love Hermione, and the way you've portrayed her. I agree that HBP was terrible Hermy-wise. So annoying. But this is fantastic and i can't wait for the next update. I would ask questions, but you aren't going to answer them, are you? ::sighs:: Guess i'll have to wait and see. But then that just makes the story all the better for reading. ::grins:: Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() I love the whole Hermione-George interaction. Even though I'm dying to ask its significance, I won't. But only because I'm feeling nice. :) |
![]() ![]() SIRIUS IS COMING NEXT CHAPTER! i am soo excited. i cant wait till u update. please do so soon. i miss him. anywho, this was an auwsome chapter. i really like the twitch in time thing. that was interesting. for a second i thought that she had gone back to the marauders time. that would have come completely out of nowhere though. i like how this story is going. update as soon as u can! |
![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! Especially the Crouch-Timeturner event. This story just keeps getting more interesting by the chapter, and I'm looking forward to reading more _ |
![]() ![]() Oh. My. Goodness. I actually had a theory that Hermione might be able to move through time a bit without using the timeturner, but dismissed it as too far-fetched. So cool. I cannot wait for Sirius. I'm hoping that they'll talk about the locket, and I can almost sense a nice Crouch conversation (which may garner a littlev sympathy and stop her from being so mad at him). I'm also waiting (most likely in vain) for her to mention the "twitch in time" to somebody. Hah! That was so cool! Youv'e managed to make Hermione a Seer and given her a really odd, quite powerful magical object (which is probably unique) without making her supergirl, able to solve every problem. Way to go! Awesome chapter! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() As usual, another good chapter on your part. And I'm ecstatic knowing that Sirius will finally be making his debut in the next chapter! I'm looking forward to it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh! It's getting better and better! Update soon! Yay Sirius! FINALLY! haha kiss kiss Annie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! George is growing on me more and more! _ And YES, Sirius shows up in the next chapter! Huzzah! Hmm...I wonder what's up with the timeturner? All in due time, I'm sure! :3 I look forward to the next chapter! |