aw...it's so good. So short, but at least you update frequently. I know Sirius can't come back (a whole nother 7 chapters? Gosh...) but he needs to so that Sirius and Hermione can have mad, passionate, totally illegal sex...I mean um...talk. _

letters please

Poor Hermione...Neville and Harry! I wonder what George is thinking...what suspicions he has going through his head...Great chapter, hope to read more soon!

you know u mite want to put this under angst too

Oh nice chapter. I love your story so much, especially Hermione's reaction in this one. Update soon!

huh, though i dont know why lupin would teach the unforgivables since it was so questioned that "moody" did it. especially since they are of such a different temperment.

and hey...will hermione's teeth ever get fixed?

huh, i guess with snape not having been at the streiking shack that he didnt get his revenge on lupin. but hm, now barty crouch jr is out of the picture eh? poor neveille doesnt get the book or the comforting speech then. and i guess the class wont learn the unforgivables. and i guess its up to hermione to fill in the gillyweed blank then. and oh i cant wait for viktor.

I want to review because you deserve lots of reviews but I really have nothing to say. All I could do is gush after every chapter.

Wow. Great chapter. VERY angsty.

The Unforgivables- I think I'm still in shock. You did a great job with Hermione's reaction, I have to say.

(Um... really really sorry about that whole "three multiplying reviews" thing. I honestly don't know why that happened. Sorry.)

More George stuff- oh goodie. I also see that Sirius isn't out of her thoughts just because he's halfway across the world.

My favorite line; "she'd felt she might let herself die with the scent of Sirius about her and never let it hut so badly ever again..."

Sweet.

Two questions:

Is she going to remember about the Malfoys, or will Sirius or Draco tell her, or is that it?

Are any of the other teachers, Order members, etc., going to be told/find out about Sirius?

(Didn't we hear about a plan to prove Sirius innocence in Out of Time? What's the plan entail?)

Guess that was four questions. Oh well.

Thanks for updating so soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow. This was brilliant. I really want this to be updated soon. Do you know how often you will be able to update? Quick I hope. This is fantastic and very mysterious!

A great chapter! The computer wouldn't accept my previous review and deleted it all (it took me about 20 minutes to type, too) so this one's gonna be shorter. Um. But not much.

Loved the letter. You could practically feel Sirius' personality flooding through the whole thing. His second "And you're sure you're all right?" was just too cute.

Lupin's back! YES! (It IS Lupin and not some deatheater impersonating him, right? The "Immediatly, she picked up on a few differences" was NOT forshadowing. Right?)

Flickering thestrals... cool. Wonder if she'll tell anyone- or just find out what they are from a book or something.

The Fight- aw, George defending her honor. Good one. HG/SB is my ultimate pair, but personally I don't think they'd last as a couple if Hermione doesn't have ANY previous romantic relationships.

A little HG/GW on the side is all right in my book.

I think one reviewer mentioned that, with the year from the timeturner, Hermione's actually closer to 16. Will you be sticking to her age as you've already mentioned it, or switching to canon?

(Personally, I think that, if you have any clever plans to brigde the HG/SB age gap, you can throw the canon out the window. Or, if you don't, you could view this as a golden opportunity to promote the romance a bit, if you want.)

As for the Triwizard Tournament- great forshadowing. Poor Hermione, victim of irony. Didn't Sirius' letter say something like "keep Harry out of it, too, whatever it is."

Shame on you, heaping all this misery on your character in the name of ironic amusement. (Though it IS rather funny.)

As for being "too busy to post" -don't worry about it. Everone has had a crazy week, and youv'e been really good with the updates so far. (I'm just hoping you don't have another too soon, though, because I REALLY want to read the next chapter.)

As always, a wonderful writing job.

A great chapter! The computer wouldn't accept my previous review and deleted it all (it took me about 20 minutes to type, too) so this one's gonna be shorter. Um. But not much.

Loved the letter. You could practically feel Sirius' personality flooding through the whole thing. His second "And you're sure you're all right?" was just too cute.

Lupin's back! YES! (It IS Lupin and not some deatheater impersonating him, right? The "Immediatly, she picked up on a few differences" was NOT forshadowing. Right?)

Flickering thestrals... cool. Wonder if she'll tell anyone- or just find out what they are from a book or something.

The Fight- aw, George defending her honor. Good one. HG/SB is my ultimate pair, but personally I don't think they'd last as a couple if Hermione doesn't have ANY previous romantic relationships.

A little HG/GW on the side is all right in my book.

I think one reviewer mentioned that, with the year from the timeturner, Hermione's actually closer to 16. Will you be sticking to her age as you've already mentioned it, or switching to canon?

(Personally, I think that, if you have any clever plans to brigde the HG/SB age gap, you can throw the canon out the window. Or, if you don't, you could view this as a golden opportunity to promote the romance a bit, if you want.)

As for the Triwizard Tournament- great forshadowing. Poor Hermione, victim of irony. Didn't Sirius' letter say something like "keep Harry out of it, too, whatever it is."

Shame on you, heaping all this misery on your character in the name of ironic amusement. (Though it IS rather funny.)

As for being "too busy to post" -don't worry about it. Everone has had a crazy week, and youv'e been really good with the updates so far. (I'm just hoping you don't have another too soon, though, because I REALLY want to read the next chapter.)

As always, a wonderful writing job.

Wow! Another great chapter!

Loved the tone of Sirius' letter, really sounds like him, especially the World Cup comments. (I also loved "And you're sure you're all right?" -so sweet.)

Great job with the thestrals flickering- it was a nice touch. Will she tell anyone? Hm. Probably not, but it would be interesting.

Professor Lupin's back! (I think.) Could it be Crouch? ("Immediately, she picked up on a few differences..." -please don't be forshadowing, please don't be forshadowing.)

Lupin's one of my favorite characters, please please don't lock him up in a trunk all year (or this story's equivalent).

Then again, Hermione's one of my favorite characters, and I don't mind you putting her though... well, everthing she goes through.

(Cruciatius, visions of a future where Voldemort wins, O.W.L.S. in Arithmancy this year, the stress of hiding a timeturner and a convict from her two best friends, etc., etc., etc.)

Huh. I might not mind as much as I should... but if you have no intention of having Lupin being impersonated by a deatheater, please please set my mind at ease.

Nice Hermione/George action. (Keep it up? Pretty please? I like Sirius/Hermione, but as he's currently thousands of miles away... and George is just across the room... Heh.)

On the subject of age, I think Kanikan is right- Hermione's really closer to sixteen. Huh. Are you going to go with J.K. Rowling, or keep it as is?

I'd say keep as is normally, but age is one of the issues in the SB/HG fics... if you already have a plan to make that less of a problem, then I don't think you need to go around changing things because of what J.K. Rowling says.

(Or, if you don't, you could view this as a golden opportunity. Whatever you think best.)

Triwizard Tournament. Wooah. Poor Hermione. "Keep Harry out of it, too, whatever it is." Sure, no problem. Piece of cake. Right.

(It's rather difficult to do sarcasm on paper.)

OOh. A thought! Is someone going to try and kidnap Hermione? Somehow, I don't think you'll answer that.

On the subject of kidnap, Malfoy is just as snarky as ever. (I have to say, while this puts him in character, I do hope he will tell her something- and "make things easier.")

I have a (doomed) liking for AlmostRedeemedMalfoy/Hermione UNEASY TRUCE fanfiction. I've found like, two. Well-written, that is. (Counting Out of Time.)Oh well.

Great chapter, by the way. Please update soon. With an ending like "It was at that moment that Hermione got a very bad feeling about what was to come," you can't be cruel enough to leave us in suspense for a week.

P.S. As always, loved the visions and voices.

This is just so good, as I would expect from the author of "out of Time" and "Lost and Found". I had been wondering whether Remus would still be at Hogwarts, as you had removed his reason for leaving at the end of Year 3. Of course now I'm intrigued as to whether Barty Crouch junior will be around (and in whose shoes - please not Lupin's - though maybe that's why he's not as tired)and . . . but the ramifications are endless. Thanks for a very interesting story. It's authors such as yourself that keep me checking ffnet. It makes up for all those dreadful stories where thirty-something British men talk like twenty-first century American teenagers - argh!

P. S. I've just thought: you couldn't have a werewolf undergoing transformations in a trunk! Yippee! Remus is safe!

i love where this is going but i really want sirius to come back. get him in the story or i will hunt u down and make u! still love this story! update soon please!

Yay! We've finally got more!

And I want more still! Come on, when's Sirius gonna show up?