Reviews for Shattered Moments |
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![]() ![]() Sweet. Update soon. Please don't let Hermione go for George, he is nice and everything but Sirius is the best! Cheers and udpate again soon ;P! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good. I just wish Sirius would appear sooner... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the last couple chapters, your story is amazing! I like Hermione/George, throw more of it in! Update soon, this story is awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() acording to the summary this is the final chapter, so tell when the next story starts |
![]() ![]() ![]() meep! squee! some other sound of joy! It's absoloutly fabulous. You've got skill! I'm really sorry about everything (I read your LJ) that's going on, and I hope it gets better for you. This story is amazing (loving the twin element, and longing for Sirius) kiss kiss Annie |
![]() ![]() Interesting twist on the time-turner story (not sure if I've mentioned that before). Just a quick comment on last chapter, Hermione would be closer to 16 then 15 (if you are adding nearly a year for all the going back in time she did during 3rd year), according to JK Rowling, when Hermione started at Hogwarts she was nearly 12 not nearly 11. Don't know if that makes a difference to your story at all, but thought you might want to know (in case you didn’t already). |
![]() ![]() ![]() After that last little bit, I'm getting really anxious to see Sirius... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, Sirius won't be around for awhile? *sighs* Oh, well, at least we've got letters. And nice chapter, by the way. I like the changes Hermione's going through - she is about the age where looks really matter and I could see her reacting like that. You've also made Ginny tolerable, which I like. A lot of fanfics portray her as incredibly obnoxious, but yours is much better. Anyway, hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() i dont like u right now. why did u end it right there huh? i cant stand cliffhangers. very mean. otherwise this was a really good chapter! but i hate what u said about how sirius wont be around for awhile. oh well, at least there will be letters. which i was looking foward to! damn all cliffhangers! breathe, just, breathe. now that my rant is over i just want to tell u how much i love where this story is going. the chemistry between the characters is great! u r a wonderful writer and im looking foward to the next chapter. update soon! |
![]() ![]() leave us hanging :) Oh well, good chappie! |
![]() ![]() Ending it there? Not fair...I was hoping that the tapping on the window might be Sirius' reply...*sigh* Lol. Good chapter and I don't mind a slightly more girly Hermione...she is a girl after all. Love your writing, looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well considerings contribution to book four was a letter sent by a tropical bird (ie he was vacationing in some tropical paradise) its an upgrade. though im sad to hear about ron's fate-i think so far you are donig a good job. and of course i do wonder on what fred think's of george's interest. and i do wonder how much more worried george is getting with her asking not to joke about their deaths. and i dont think you make hermione girly. i think you make her just the right amount. she is at that age and there is the curiosity and how of course society rears us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so no draco warning eh? instead we have hermione getting hit quite hard. i was rather disappointed to see hermoine not have any flashes of ron. but given the situation you prob did the better-its a different thing though when she will see him up close at hogwarts. {“I bet you did this at one point too, Fred!”} aww {“That’s not really true, and you know it. It’s hard to use common sense when you don’t know what you’re dealing with.”} nicely said. and hey will she rember that moody is actually crouch jr? |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, i so adore this fic. just things like the last line. thus ive decided since i just was finally corrupted into writing an lj that this would be my first fic to spotlight (if you really dislike the idea just tell me and ill put it on private so ill have the info to myself). man im just thinking just how much of harry and ron not events changes things. and hey! snape totally wasnt there. i wonder how that would effect things. maybe a little bit less animosity between he and lupin. its really interesting watching ron and how he shifts around i do wonder why her acceptance of the twins seem to upset george. worried just on how she is acting? oh and i do wonder if she would say anthing more in her sleep. |
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