Great chapter! Nice Hermione and George scene, I love the friendship and character developments you are writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

THat was a good chapter, twisting the plot just slightly.

Waho! I've been waiting for this chapter, and you most certainly did not dissapoint! I loved you take on George, I loved Hermione's feelings on Vela and the minister... all great.

Was that spell really a Stunner? It just seems a little strong... and I'd have though she would have recognized that spell- it seems like something Sirius would have taught her.

Oh! I can't wait to see what Sirius does whan he finds out that Hermione got attacked by a couple of trigger-happy Aurors. I'm picturing Rita Skeeter writing a big article on that (as well as how The-Boy-Who-Lived got accosted for questioning) right now.

(I know, I just love torturing people with mad tangent ideas.)

Haha! Great chapter! Again, I loved George in this piece. If I didn't know this was SB/HG I'd be sniffing for romance. Huh. Maybe I spoke too soon. She's probably going to the Yule Ball with someone, and who said it had to be Krum?

I'd like her to dance with Sirius, but convicted murderers are not normally invited to school dances. Besides, Sirius should get a bit jeaslous at times; it spices things up.

(Actually, I'm fine with George in the Big Brother role, I just want to see Sirius jealous.)

There were some great lines in there; snarky stuf about Aurors, and Hermione telling George how rules lost their value... Awesome chapter.

Can't wait to see Molly Weasley (and Sirius).

BUT... will Hermione be involved in S.P.E.W. if she hasn't SEEN Winky treated so badly? I'd say "probably" but.. she's AWFULLY busy.

In my opinion, the best Shattered Moments chapter yet.

Update soon! (please?)

Best chapter yet

I'm reading this at 2:30 in the morning, so if I sound disoriented, that's exactly the reason why.

Anyhow, I'm truly enjoying this one as much as I did the prequel, though, I am still waiting for the Hermione/Sirius goodness, ya know. (Wink, wink; nudge, nudge)

Good chapter. Keep up the good work,

gamergal20

Can't wait to see what happens when she encounters the Malfoys!

Nice chapter! I liked the bits where Harry talks to her and Ron. I think the boys are getting worried about her. Last year they could write her behavior off as stree from classes, but now she's spacing out during summer vacation.

Just an observation: We know she's not under the imperious Curse (right now, anyway) but the boys don't. Hermione's acting almost like Ginny in first year, and we all know what happened THEN.

Might people not believe her NOT because thay don't trust her, but because they think she's under some sort of controlling spell?

Now that I'm on that subject, I've noticed: there ARE some creepy similarities between Ginny's first year and Hermione's third/fourth. The enchanted objects, for one. I can't help but wonder if the timeturner contains Future Hermione's memory, like the diary did Riddle's past memory.

The only thing that stops me from thinking that is this: While we know Hermione's used Voldemort's ideas against him before (galleons, DA,) I can't ever picture her stooping to Dark Magic, or Dumbledore telling her to.

Another question: What was she writing in her journal/notepad that she gave to Fred and George? I think it might have had something to do with W, but why was George upset? Was he just worried for her or something?

I'm glad Bagman didn't cheat the twins this time 'round, and for thier sake I hope I havn't spoken too soon.

It was a nice read, and I hope you update soon!

woot! A round of applause for the talented author. I've been getting your author alerts for this story so today I finally went back and reread Out of Time, and this. I must say you're doing your self proud! This is absoloutly amazing and I hope you continue to update quickly

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Annie

Another great chapter. Harry's back! I was wondering how he would react to his scar hurting, as he doesn't have Sirius to ask. It was also very clever for him to be confused about Wormtail, writing instead, "Wrym's tail." After all, he doesn't know who Wormtail even is.

Something that worried me though, is that Sirius was spotted in Albania. I hope that's an old sighting, as it's probably not a good idea for him to be where Wormtail and Voldemort just were... but then again, Sirius is reckless. He may just be looking anywhere he can for Wormtail.

Anyway, update soon! This story is just getting better and better.

I see, I think I got it now, its the future Hermiones memories, becuase her future self uses the time turner too, makeing more and more, so Hermiones memory could get like, really old and... nevermind.

Was it my question? haha. I read the first one, very good, I think I understand now.

good chapter! i like how u r writing the story and how its different from cannon.

with this version, the malfoys sitting near them will make everything a lot more exciting. cant wait till next update!

Poor Hermione! Great chapter, hope to read more soon _

Poor Hermione! I love the interaction between her and the twins. I think they really help loosen her up but are still bright enough to stimulate her intellectually. Not disimilar to her interactuions with Sirius, I suppose, but quite different to Harry (too intense, not surprisingly) and Ron (fun but not motivated enough intellectually). I'm going back to read "Out of Time"! Thanks for the prompt updates. I understand why you had to take your time with "Waking Dreams" but I'm selfish enough not to want to wait that long!

good chapter. continue please!

i just finished out of time and these first couple of chapters. this series is bloody amazing! the first time i saw o.o.t. on fanfiction i did'nt read it because it took place in 3 year but i just now gave it a chance and i'm really glad i did. i've never read a fic like this. it's very original. i've also read lost and found awhile ago and that is 1 of my favorite fics. u r 1 of my favorite writers on here. update soon! i'll be reviewing.