Great chapter, as always. Fred and George were great... I'm looking forward to seeing more of them.

And Harry's coming in next chapter? Looking forward to that _

Loved the beginning of the story. It's so great. Make Hermione help the twins because I love them too. Your stories are awesome, update them soon!

Another great chapter! Harry coming in the next? Looking forward to reading more _

Simply lovely, update soon!

Wow, that was an uncomfortable revelation!

Wonderful! This chapter was superb. The Weasley twins and Ginny especially were spot-on characterization wise, and they did alot to spur the plot on.

So did the visions. I was glad to see Ron in one of them (vision-wise, the poor guy has been a bit neglected, I don't think he was in any of the visions mentioned in Out of Time) and I spent a few entertaining minutes trying to pinpoint what they were talking about, where they were, when it was, etc. (I'm thinking Hermione and Ron were trying to decide what to do after Harry, the only person who could kill Voldemort, died.)

I'd also like to mention here that Hermione's visions are, in my opinion, one of the greatest parts of your story. Their addition really spices things up, and I love trying to read between the lines, figuring out what they mean.

I enjoyed Fred and George asking Hermione for help with Weasley's Wizarding Wheezes, and I liked the fact that you didn't come out and say that's what they were doing, but rather implied it.

After Ginny saw the timeturner, a full dozen "what if" scenarios popped into my head. I'm smelling a major plotline here. Someone who knows about the timeturner (even if she doesn't recognize it) and is in a perfect position to find out about all the nightmares.

Secrets, secrets, I love all the secrets in the "Twisted Timelines" series. (Nice title, by the way.)

A little mystery is good. A lot of mystery is often better, and you've done a superb job using that mystery to make this story suspensful and interesting.

I can't wait to see what happens when Harry comes, and when they go to the World Cup. I'm wondering if Hermione will see Bagman and remember his difficulty in paying up, or see Bode and have a vision of the DoM battle, or... well, you get the picture. I have a few ideas, but I'm prepared to be suprised -so far you've been very difficult to guess.

Well, I'll find out when I find out, and in the meantime, I'll be eagerly awaiting your next few updates.

P.S. I love your characterization of Charlie, and I'm glad that the twins will have a bigger role in your story. I'm also looking forward to seeing Sirius, though that's probably several chapters away.

P.P.S. Briefly during Out of Time, you switched to the twins POV. (Only for a few lines at the end of the chapter after Hermione left, and we didn't know what they were thinking.) Will you be doing that again, during Shattered Moments?

Again, a wonderful chapter.

Wowie...so the voices tell the future? And the past? Wait... lol, update soon!

Yersh. Splendid...as expected. So...a bit of twin and Hermione convergence. Lovely, lovely day. You know, I've meant to mention this, but I enjoy how there's no excessive deliniation between these memories and the present other than italics- it helps preserve the unworldliness of it for Hermione for the reader as well. Makes me think of Perfect Blue actually.

Right, well, I'm off to dedicate a couple hours to only writing. Here's hoping!

Awesome! Update again soon! Cheers! ;P

Great update... I didn't think that was boring at all, it was actually pretty faced-paced and forward. Hermione's hesitance to use the timeturner was good, as well as her fear about the "voices" returning. The "Geronimo" part was cute... much better name than Pigwidgeon, anyway.

I'm looking forward to the next update... I can't wait to see Sirius's reaction to what happens at the World Cup.

Hope you update soon.

O! Good start! It's unusual for a time turner fic not to just leap straight in there! I love your style of writing! Keep up the good work!

ooh! if you'd be here you'd get to hear me squeal happily at the prospect of: a) a new fic by none other than rurouni star b) a sequel at that, and to one of her most promising anlthough somewhat unsatisfying stories c) several chapters of wonderfully angsty and funny and (here's the key kiddos) well written chapters of SBHG. as it stands, you'll just have to take my word for it. I'm ridiculusly happy you're writing HP again. Can't seem to figure out just how much AU this is going to be though, but I guess it'll show eventually. thanks for writing, again, and good luck.

I'm just so excited to see how everything goes, I can't wait to see the next chapter _ Great chapter, surprised by the owl's name-but Geronimo fits just as well too. The whispering seems to be coming back as well...Great chapter, am looking forward to the next!

Yay! XD I just found this. I loved Out of Time and I've been checking for a sequel for a long time. ;) I'm so glad your doing this! It's very well written, and the characterizations are great.

I loved the twins and Charlie, and I'm looking forward to seeing Bill as well. ;)

Durr...I so thought I reviewed for chapter one. Oh well. To make up for it, I'll, er...write extra here. Super for you.

I completely love the alternate universe you've managed to create here. It makes me think of that whole butterfly wing idea. One slight change, and it all ripples outward. I especially enjoy your characterization of Hermione. You've managed to give her personality the roundness lacking in the JK's books. Not that that is in any way a disparagement to the goddess of literature: JKR. Not at all. Just...it's nice to see roundness.

And now we have the Weasleys! Yippee! I am a big lover of the Weasleys and giving those poor underdog Weasleys a chance at stardom. Here's to Charlie...and maybe some twin action.