Reviews for Shattered Moments
donahermurphy chapter 2 . 5/24/2005
Thanks for updating so quickly! I have some trivial (are they?) questions for you that I hope you can answer in your next author note, if they aren't revealed later in the story.

What did Sirius cross out in his letter? (ch 1)

Why was the door open in Chapter 2, or, better yet, why does Hermione remember closing the door even though that isn't mentioned in Chapter 1?

Is the different Knight Bus conductor significant, or no?

I loved Hermione's view of the Burrow. This was a wonderful chapter, with some great touches on Ron's characterization, as well as Hermione's relationship with the twins.

I really enjoyed chapter 2, and I wouldn't have known you had any trouble writing it if you hadn't said. I loved seeing the Weasleys through Hermione's eyes, though I am hoping for a Sirius POV to crop up sometime during the story.

Once again, a wonderful read.
becky chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay
doesn't live here anymore chapter 2 . 5/24/2005
With all the people there, I never pictured the Burrow as boring. I think you managed to keep it quite busy!
donahermurphy chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I'm so glad you finally started posting the sequel! Out of Time remains one of the most well-written fanfictions I have read, and Shattered Moments seems to be turning out equally well, though we've only seen the first chapter so far. I think the part of the letter where Sirius scrobbled something out was a particularly nice touch.I also love how you offset parts like these with a bit of dark foreshadowing, even in the summary! "A misbehaving timeturner" indeed. I continue to love your choices of quotes. Please update soon, your pieces are always such an entertaining read.
Le Grimoire chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Hm, I do wonder if she'll have a 'dream' and end up naming the owl Pigwidgeon.

I'm so glad to see you have started the sequel! And I'm really looking forward to the next update. :]
Li-chan chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Yay the second part has alas come! Lol, I loved your first one, and I'm sure this one will be great too. Very excited to see how fourth year will go-considering all the important events that happen in it...

Hope to read more soon!
Rane2920072 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
It has been a long time dear! Please do update again soon! I very much liked your other story last time! Again update soon and cheers ;P!
Withering chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
I'm so glad you decided to post your sequel. I had been worrying that you had decided to abandon it, but I'm glad you didn't. Out of Time was a favorite of mine, and I'm really excited to read the sequel. Hope you update soon!
Azriel Ursula Thorne chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Joy! This first chapter just made me hungry for more. Eagerly awaiting your next post.
doesn't live here anymore chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Can't wait to read more, update soon!
TDU chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I've been wondering about the sequel. I would imagine this is harder to do in a way, as so many things are now different from Goblet of Fire, whereas "Out of Time" just changed as you progresed.
fly chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
So you're doing a sequel great! have to read more
Godric'sGrl01 chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
At last an update! That was a great chappie! Loved the letter, he almost comes over as fatherly!

Hope you write more soon
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