Reviews for Shattered Moments
Favored chapter 36 . 6/26/2009
That was really... Wow.

I couldn't stop reading after I got going- chapter after chapter, one blending into the next. I don't have a migraine - not just yet, anyway.
xXKaira-HimeXx chapter 36 . 6/22/2009
That was truly amazingly wonderful! I LUV it XD
psychegurl chapter 31 . 6/10/2009
You have a timeline? Wouldn't you need a timesphere for something like this?
psychegurl chapter 30 . 6/10/2009
Ah...and THAT's why we love Ron. "The only unchanging thing," indeed. Also why he's so hard to characterize - because in order to be unchanging, the author writing him must also be unchanged, and none of us is J.K. Rowling.

(This is a slightly self-indulgent response to something I came across in an Author's Note a little earlier in my personal timeline - that you hated writing Ron.)
psychegurl chapter 29 . 6/10/2009
You are amazing. You are a genius. I know I'm sounding like some raving lunatic fan, but I don't care. This is so bloody brilliant I have no words, and the characters are heart-wrenching and it has lots and lots of lovely angst and it's beautifully crafted and your voice is so perfect for the story structure...And you know the best part? IT ALL FITS WITH THE SEVENTH BOOK (well, except the "Harry dies" part, but that sort of even happened, and except the Ron/Hermione bit, but I think we can all agree that your pairings are better). And you wrote it BEFORE DH was written. Gah. I'm in AWE.
Atilia Dawn Black chapter 36 . 5/28/2009
Ok, I'm really really really confused, which isn't that amazing really because I've been struggling through this entire story, but I was hooked by Out of Time and I just couldn't stop! I don't get how harry's not the one to defeat voldie anymore. sirius and hermione defied him 3 times because of changing timelines but what does her visiting azkaban in july do with anything. Did she change sirius at that time so that he was re'born' to defeat voldie?

Why did giving hermione the ring help? You skipped over that. And why are'nt red and gold his colors anymore, is it cause he went to azkaban? cause he was re'born'? I'm just so confused, I hate undefinite endings they drive me crazy. But I loved the story! I'll gladly put up with all the insaneness for a great story. I guess a time changing story has to be confusing because of paradox's and everything.

Anyways, to get away from confusing myself even more, I'll just tell you I think you're story is amazing and I wish you the best of luck with your own novel. I started reading Out of Time 3 days ago (and it was also wonderful) and once I was done I jumped straight into this story. I'm prolly a nutcase myself for reading all this straight through, but I just couldn't help myself.

This is an aweful long review, so I'll think I'll stop now, again, great story best of luck with your novel!

Atilia Dawn Black
vamp1987 chapter 36 . 5/16/2009
This story was great. I only knew/understood a little about black holes before I read this story so your overview helped. I liked crazy Hermione; it was an interesting change for her as well as highlighting some of the things JK developed for her. You kept Hermione's character true even while she was falling apart. I do have a question though, what was the rest of the prophecy mentioned? Was it in the first part of the story because I can't remember. Anyway, good luck with the book and comic. Hope they get finished and published.
PiecesOfSerendipity chapter 36 . 4/9/2009
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant!

Fabulous plot that is extremely confusing and I had to read the Authors Notes to understand (thank you for them!).

My favourite lines are

"I need to get a new hobby. Obviously, I’ve been Hermione-watching too much."

"He heaved a huge, melodramatic sigh for the benefit of the empty room.."

They probably are't the best, or the funniest, or the most in-depth. But i burst out laughing at both.

How do they figure out she is crazy though? Because the chapter opens with her at the hospital wing.. what happens? And why isn't she allowed visitors? Im stupid aren't i? I should get it but i dont. I love how she slowly goes mad. If i was in her situation i would get rid of the time-turner and commit suicide. Too much pressure. Im glad she didn't though - it was worth it in the end.

So.. does Hermione end up with Sirius? Because they keep on kissing.. I don't think she should. She should be alone or be with Fred.

I can't believe you aren't doing a sequel! I am begging you! PLEASE do a sequel about hermione defeating voldymort.
PiecesOfSerendipity chapter 22 . 4/8/2009
xDD

Hilarious! Seriously, he went off to get a banana! xDD
Multitaskmom chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
I like seeing this part of the story. I have to admit though, I have a crush on Charlie...so when Hermione jumped at his touch, my heart did a little flip. I've recently read an absolutely wonderful Charlie/Hermione fic, so I am especially prone to heart palpitations when he is written wonderfully. How embarrassing. I'm grown, married, mother. Oh well. ;)
krachum chapter 36 . 3/8/2009
Vr compeling story, nicely written. Things evolved very naturally between the characters. and hermione going crazy was also done convincingly. loved it! though a little depressing...
Loves Curse chapter 36 . 1/19/2009
Incredible...

I read this series first about two years ago or something and then I let it rest because I am not that patient, last week I have been reading the entire thing again, and really, incredible, wonderful, amazing, superb...

If there is ever going to be another story, profiting on the prophecy of the one born end July... let me know :)

Thanks for a truly great story, both in content and writing style and allure,

Yours sincerely,

Loves Curse~
Cribellate chapter 36 . 1/4/2009
Wow.

That story was actually amazing xD

I must complain at the lack of a sequel, however I do understand your reasoning behind it xD

Anyhows.

Keep writing!
dracosnumber1girl chapter 36 . 12/27/2008
I'm going to address things in a completely odd manner, I hope that's all right? Ron is an extremely difficult character to write, I agree. By the way, I'm reviewing two stories at once, so I'm sorry if I mess up some random details. I absolutely love and abhor your story all at the same time. The same things that made me love it, made me hate it because I couldn't understand it. I feel like Hermione in the story (not the one in the timeturner). I loved how you twisted everything and I completely didn't understand anything unless I read and reread your author's notes. I enjoyed your characterization of Sirius and Hermione, but I LOVED your characterization of George. You totally made me fall in love with him and made me able to see a possible relationship between them (I always DID think George was the more sensible one, Fred was reckless and George was calculating, at least, as calculating as a prankster can be.) and I cannot wait to possibly read a story with them as the protagonists. I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that you cast Dumbledore as the half bad guy. I never really completely enjoy stories in which Dumbledore has all the answers and is infallible. I also love the fact that you addressed the issue of Hermione getting older. I always wondered how that would have worked in the long run. Did you actually figure out how old she would be, or did you leave it at "the story works if I do this, who cares about the real math?" because I don't really care either way, but it would be cool if you actually did the math. By the way, you finally made me understand the concept of a black hole. Another thing I liked was the unblatant (is that even a word?) relationship between Hermione and Sirius. It didn't really even come into play until the final few chapters, and I really liked that. I can't think of much else to say without rambling, except is your book out yet and where can I buy it if it is? Okay, and I look at how many favorites people have to judge whether they actually like a story or not, but please don't judge. My tastes have changed dramatically over the four and a half years I've read fanfiction, and I'm too lazy to clean out my closet.
screamsofashadow chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Seriously, you totally left this open for a third installment. But it's been almost 2 YEARS since this fic was completed. For that matter, you haven't published anything on FFN since October of this year... What's going on? I want to know how this saga ends.
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