Reviews for The Track of a Storm
imlovinfanfic chapter 26 . 1/14
The confrontation with the Dursley's wasn't what I expected, very anticlimatic. There wasn't really any punishment for their crime of child abuse. They really deserved some kind of punishment. It didn't have to be sadistic, just punishment fitting the crime, but as Maurauders you would have thought it would have at least been more imaginative. The Dursley's abused a child for years and got away with it, completely.
Grosvenor chapter 26 . 12/11/2023
Very good story . Well done !
Grosvenor chapter 11 . 12/11/2023
What about calling for Dobby , Harry ?
Aetherium21 chapter 1 . 10/24/2023
Why is James using hogwarts spells only?
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 9/21/2023
She shouldn't have killed them.
szw5009 chapter 26 . 2/15/2023
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 8 . 7/19/2022
I hope things pick up. I’d like to see Harry at Hogwarts already.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 6 . 7/19/2022
Why did a muggle tell Voldemort about Harry? How did he even know who to tell? Lucius literally said he didn’t want to go back to torturing and killing. Yet here he is.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 5 . 7/19/2022
Remus?! Why?!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 4 . 7/19/2022
Pettigrew was definitely called to Voldemort. I’m surprised the Slytherin’s were insulted that Percy “insulted” Dumbledore. Unless it was just an excuse to hit Percy.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 3 . 7/19/2022
Lol. The groundskeepers dint seems all that worries that a man is back from the dead. And ooh boy. The Order of the Phoenix is about to be back in business.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 2 . 7/19/2022
I really hope this isn’t another fic where Voldemort is James’s dad. No thank you. Poor Draco. So this sucks. Like not the story, but in general that Voldemort is back this early. Will the Sorcerer’s Stone still be in Hogwarts? Will the Chamber of a secrets still be opened? Hmmmm.
Sohaila 2005 chapter 10 . 11/22/2021
Abaddon says darling and dear too often. It makes him sound like a pervert. And he probably is with all those touches and the "gentle" voice
Sohaila 2005 chapter 21 . 11/11/2021
Sirius trying to convince Remus that he killes everyone was just funny despite the situation.ω. I mean, honestly Remus, of all times to realise the truth?
MuggleHarry16 chapter 26 . 9/16/2021
Loved this story so much! I have to say, the interaction between James, Sirius, and Remus is some of the best I've ever read :) Great Job! Honestly wished there was more!
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