Reviews for The Track of a Storm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope things pick up. I’d like to see Harry at Hogwarts already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did a muggle tell Voldemort about Harry? How did he even know who to tell? Lucius literally said he didn’t want to go back to torturing and killing. Yet here he is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Remus?! Why?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pettigrew was definitely called to Voldemort. I’m surprised the Slytherin’s were insulted that Percy “insulted” Dumbledore. Unless it was just an excuse to hit Percy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. The groundskeepers dint seems all that worries that a man is back from the dead. And ooh boy. The Order of the Phoenix is about to be back in business. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope this isn’t another fic where Voldemort is James’s dad. No thank you. Poor Draco. So this sucks. Like not the story, but in general that Voldemort is back this early. Will the Sorcerer’s Stone still be in Hogwarts? Will the Chamber of a secrets still be opened? Hmmmm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Abaddon says darling and dear too often. It makes him sound like a pervert. And he probably is with all those touches and the "gentle" voice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius trying to convince Remus that he killes everyone was just funny despite the situation.ω. I mean, honestly Remus, of all times to realise the truth? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story so much! I have to say, the interaction between James, Sirius, and Remus is some of the best I've ever read :) Great Job! Honestly wished there was more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awake him from death only to imprisioned... this plot sucks... i am only reading further because finished stories are almost rare... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ignore that one trolls comment theh gave apparently never heard the expression if you have nothing nice to say don't say anything at all. They're wrong this story is amazing definitely one of my favorites |
![]() ![]() What pathetic story and all first 10chapters especially. What's the use of James Potter being alive? That was just a bait you used in summary. This story is one of the worse and sadist ones, not to forget the writing is unable to hold interest. N Remus is a selfish coward not protecting Harry. I hate this story b |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is one of my favorites. did you ever post the updated one? and where at? I would LOVE to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |