Reviews for The Track of a Storm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So, no one-shot of Marauders vs Dursleys. But I’ll keep an eye out for it…. Even if its been close to 2 decades since you wrote this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. It wasnt what I expected when i started reading it… the plot that is. But amazingly written and wonderfully put together. The pace was just right. I absolutely adored Progs’ and Padfoot’s friendship. Even after 7 years, they picked up where they left off. Nothing was awkward between them. It was as if nothing happened and i loved it. Yes, i would have loved to see what the Marauders would do to the Dursleys and I’m going to search that one-shot after writing this review. Thank you for giving this story 2 years of your life and giving us this wonderful story. Thank you once again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would they need to catch Peter to prove Siri innocent? James can testify that Siri wasn’t the secret keeper also they can view their memories in the pensieve AND use the veritaserus on them both. What more proof would the ministery need when the James “the victim” says it wasn’t Siri. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is turning out to be something I wasnt expecting. I was expexting it to be James coming back and raising Harry with Sirius. Dont get me wrong, this story is quite interesting but I really hope James escapes imprisonment and goes straight to Hogwarts to find Harry and getting Sirius out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The confrontation with the Dursley's wasn't what I expected, very anticlimatic. There wasn't really any punishment for their crime of child abuse. They really deserved some kind of punishment. It didn't have to be sadistic, just punishment fitting the crime, but as Maurauders you would have thought it would have at least been more imaginative. The Dursley's abused a child for years and got away with it, completely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story . Well done ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about calling for Dobby , Harry ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is James using hogwarts spells only? |
![]() ![]() ![]() She shouldn't have killed them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope things pick up. I’d like to see Harry at Hogwarts already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did a muggle tell Voldemort about Harry? How did he even know who to tell? Lucius literally said he didn’t want to go back to torturing and killing. Yet here he is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Remus?! Why?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pettigrew was definitely called to Voldemort. I’m surprised the Slytherin’s were insulted that Percy “insulted” Dumbledore. Unless it was just an excuse to hit Percy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. The groundskeepers dint seems all that worries that a man is back from the dead. And ooh boy. The Order of the Phoenix is about to be back in business. |