Reviews for The Track of a Storm
Alif Aain chapter 26 . 1/20
So, no one-shot of Marauders vs Dursleys. But I’ll keep an eye out for it…. Even if its been close to 2 decades since you wrote this story.
Alif Aain chapter 25 . 1/20
Wonderful story. It wasnt what I expected when i started reading it… the plot that is. But amazingly written and wonderfully put together. The pace was just right. I absolutely adored Progs’ and Padfoot’s friendship. Even after 7 years, they picked up where they left off. Nothing was awkward between them. It was as if nothing happened and i loved it. Yes, i would have loved to see what the Marauders would do to the Dursleys and I’m going to search that one-shot after writing this review. Thank you for giving this story 2 years of your life and giving us this wonderful story. Thank you once again!
Alif Aain chapter 23 . 1/20
Why would they need to catch Peter to prove Siri innocent? James can testify that Siri wasn’t the secret keeper also they can view their memories in the pensieve AND use the veritaserus on them both. What more proof would the ministery need when the James “the victim” says it wasn’t Siri.
Alif Aain chapter 8 . 1/19
This story is turning out to be something I wasnt expecting. I was expexting it to be James coming back and raising Harry with Sirius. Dont get me wrong, this story is quite interesting but I really hope James escapes imprisonment and goes straight to Hogwarts to find Harry and getting Sirius out.
imlovinfanfic chapter 26 . 1/14/2024
The confrontation with the Dursley's wasn't what I expected, very anticlimatic. There wasn't really any punishment for their crime of child abuse. They really deserved some kind of punishment. It didn't have to be sadistic, just punishment fitting the crime, but as Maurauders you would have thought it would have at least been more imaginative. The Dursley's abused a child for years and got away with it, completely.
Grosvenor chapter 26 . 12/11/2023
Very good story . Well done !
Grosvenor chapter 11 . 12/11/2023
What about calling for Dobby , Harry ?
Aetherium21 chapter 1 . 10/24/2023
Why is James using hogwarts spells only?
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 9/21/2023
She shouldn't have killed them.
szw5009 chapter 26 . 2/15/2023
Thanks!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 8 . 7/19/2022
I hope things pick up. I’d like to see Harry at Hogwarts already.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 6 . 7/19/2022
Why did a muggle tell Voldemort about Harry? How did he even know who to tell? Lucius literally said he didn’t want to go back to torturing and killing. Yet here he is.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 5 . 7/19/2022
Remus?! Why?!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 4 . 7/19/2022
Pettigrew was definitely called to Voldemort. I’m surprised the Slytherin’s were insulted that Percy “insulted” Dumbledore. Unless it was just an excuse to hit Percy.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 3 . 7/19/2022
Lol. The groundskeepers dint seems all that worries that a man is back from the dead. And ooh boy. The Order of the Phoenix is about to be back in business.
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