Reviews for The Track of a Storm
nairiefairie chapter 11 . 10/14/2009
poor remus is having a bad day. *grins* i think i want to adopt abaddon,he is adorable!lol
nairiefairie chapter 10 . 10/14/2009
happy birthday indeed.
nairiefairie chapter 9 . 10/14/2009
gasp! oh no! i really like abaddon now.
nairiefairie chapter 8 . 10/14/2009
now that was an interesting chapter, i must say. i think i like this abaddon chap, i like it when the bad guy is.. well bad ;)
nairiefairie chapter 7 . 10/14/2009
hello there, didn't know if i had reviewed yet but i thought i would tell you how much i am enjoying it this far. i loved your oc's James was with and i love,love,love peter's mum. ;) onward i go!
Crimson Masquerade chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Oh wow this is really, REALLY good! I love James, but you write him on a whole different level from most people. I loved how you portrayed his goofy attitude that belies such a haunted heart, and his love for Lily and - most of all - for Harry. It was actually very powerful, I thought. And the fight was written really well too, even though I knew how it would end I was on the edge of my chair! I hope the rest of this fic turns out as beautiful as this chapter, great work! :)
I'm A PureEvil chapter 26 . 8/24/2009
I found the story yesterday, and finished it today (at four in the morning!)

I loved it! It was beautiful and great!

You followed their characters wonderfully (even Lucius- no matter how evil people make him, both Draco and he really care about the family), and made Harry such a seven year old! Some people don't do that, the kids are so unbelievably mature!

The ending (25) just made me all goose bumpy... and at the 26th chapter, when Vernon and Petunia were all cussing and stuff, I was all like: "you are talking to Harry's dad who returned from the dead, Harry's ex-convict godfather, and a werewolf who is also somehow happens to be Harry's uncle. I'm pretty sure you should be grateful they don't throw you into the great lake for the giant squid and merpeople to eat you!"

Draco was absolutely adorable and in character even though he was seven, you managed to keep his rude and prince like demeanor which was quite awesome!

I just loved it, I don't have anymore to say...

I even recommended it on my profile!

I'm A PureEvil

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Sei Hishida chapter 26 . 8/5/2009
This is an absolutely lovely story, I'm so happy I read it, and thank you for writing!
Bagoosa chapter 20 . 7/30/2009
Draco is adorable. You wrote him perfectly.
Bagoosa chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
You are cruel to your characters. Not that I'm complaining; it makes the story interesting.
knightsbridge chapter 26 . 7/27/2009
It would seem that the site you mentioned... doesn't or no longer exists. are you posting the new version somewhere else?

This is a great story, and the thought of a new and improved version being out there in cyberspace unknown to most of us doesn't set well.

At least, thanks for THIS version.

Darian
heiressofanor chapter 26 . 6/17/2009
Great story! I really liked it! :)
Bob-sama chapter 26 . 5/11/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY! It is so well written and believable. I hope you have a sequel!
Bob-sama chapter 13 . 5/8/2009
AW SO CUTE! Great ending for this chapter!
starwhales chapter 23 . 4/20/2009
Major AW.
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