Reviews for The Track of a Storm
55artix chapter 1 . 12/19/2020
StardustOwl chapter 26 . 6/30/2020
This is an absolutely wonderful story and I have had such a brilliant day reading it all! The plot and the characters are fantastic! Very well done! Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us all!
Irina Hunter chapter 4 . 5/3/2020
Percy, Oliver, and Flint wouldn't be at Hogwarts yet.
thescribblerdragon chapter 26 . 11/18/2019
There were some parts of this story that I loved (the concept for one) but others were just utterly confusing. I’d LOVE to read the new and updated version you mentioned in your last a/n and in your author bio but I can’t seem to find it anywhere so I guess you tragically never got around to uploading it?
ordinaryguy2 chapter 3 . 9/27/2019
This seems interesting. It can go so many ways. I like it. Too bad Lily couldn't come back, too.
jgrc12345 chapter 20 . 8/29/2019
I made it to chapter 20, but I can’t really go on. The plot of this story is intriguing, but the execution is a bumbling mess. It is difficult to understand what is going on most of the time, as there is no insight into the motivations of the characters. James is a mess. There are plot holes galore. And the only reason I can surmise that the protagonists haven’t been killed time and time again because they are talking for ages instead of acting is because Voldemort is also talking for ages instead of acting.
I honestly can’t take more of this. I wish it had been done better.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/15/2019
Incredible.. just incredible.

You are so astoundingly talented mate! Your take on the maruders is breathtaking! Your take on seven year old Harry is exceptional! You're brilliant!
I haven't read all of the story yet, but I'm hooked, I was about 11 years late tho! I was like 11 when you made this, and didn't know fanfiction excisted back then

I'm glad I get to take part of your story now tho, thank you so much for making this, you give James Potter justice, like so many fail to do!

Thanks loads!
Dennis. S. 15th of June, 2019. Swedish fan of your work.
Don't-call-me-Nymphadora-112 chapter 26 . 2/3/2019
I think this was a really good FanFiction and you should do a story continuing from this where harry goes to school or something
ncbexie25 chapter 26 . 12/13/2018
I absolutely loved this story. I've been on a real kick for stories where one or both of Harry's parents have returned to life and this was one of the best I've read so far 3 Thank you for sharing!
Scripturient16 chapter 26 . 3/10/2018
So, you say that this is the first draft, and that there's a better version, and it's been.. Wow, TEN years.. I just want you to know, I've never found an HP fanfiction where everything turns out rosy and it all makes sense.. You don't make thing seem ethereal... You make everything happen for a reason, and still manage to put in all that I want and just.. Thanks. Thank you for keeping me up the day before my exam, knowing that I'll only be thinking about Harry rather than my lessons and... Thanks. I love the way you write. I want write heaps more... appreciating you on many more points, but I'm supposed to be asleep. Suffice it to say, even though this seems arrogant (I can't help it), it's very rare that I like HP fanfics that I really like.. This is one. Definitely
Unknownem chapter 18 . 12/16/2017
Good story. Was the whole "what you think of will come true" thing inspired by ghostbusters in anyway. When Snape told him to think of something harmless, I was like 'THE MARSHMELLOW MAN!'

Anyway really liked it
Aqua468 chapter 25 . 8/2/2017
Fluxer chapter 26 . 6/25/2017
Great fanfic! May I translate it into Russian and publish the translation on ?
1,126 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 4 5 12 .. Last Next »