I really hope this isn’t another fic where Voldemort is James’s dad. No thank you. Poor Draco. So this sucks. Like not the story, but in general that Voldemort is back this early. Will the Sorcerer’s Stone still be in Hogwarts? Will the Chamber of a secrets still be opened? Hmmmm.

Abaddon says darling and dear too often. It makes him sound like a pervert. And he probably is with all those touches and the "gentle" voice

Sirius trying to convince Remus that he killes everyone was just funny despite the situation.ω. I mean, honestly Remus, of all times to realise the truth?

Loved this story so much! I have to say, the interaction between James, Sirius, and Remus is some of the best I've ever read :) Great Job! Honestly wished there was more!

awake him from death only to imprisioned... this plot sucks... i am only reading further because finished stories are almost rare...

Ignore that one trolls comment theh gave apparently never heard the expression if you have nothing nice to say don't say anything at all. They're wrong this story is amazing definitely one of my favorites

What pathetic story and all first 10chapters especially. What's the use of James Potter being alive? That was just a bait you used in summary. This story is one of the worse and sadist ones, not to forget the writing is unable to hold interest. N Remus is a selfish coward not protecting Harry. I hate this story b

Loved it!

This story is one of my favorites. did you ever post the updated one? and where at? I would LOVE to read it!

nice

This is an absolutely wonderful story and I have had such a brilliant day reading it all! The plot and the characters are fantastic! Very well done! Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us all!

Percy, Oliver, and Flint wouldn't be at Hogwarts yet.

There were some parts of this story that I loved (the concept for one) but others were just utterly confusing. I’d LOVE to read the new and updated version you mentioned in your last a/n and in your author bio but I can’t seem to find it anywhere so I guess you tragically never got around to uploading it?

This seems interesting. It can go so many ways. I like it. Too bad Lily couldn't come back, too.

I made it to chapter 20, but I can’t really go on. The plot of this story is intriguing, but the execution is a bumbling mess. It is difficult to understand what is going on most of the time, as there is no insight into the motivations of the characters. James is a mess. There are plot holes galore. And the only reason I can surmise that the protagonists haven’t been killed time and time again because they are talking for ages instead of acting is because Voldemort is also talking for ages instead of acting.
I honestly can’t take more of this. I wish it had been done better.