Reviews for The Track of a Storm |
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Maraudersgirl89 chapter 1 . 5/25/2005 That was really something. A good something too. I loved James feelings and actions with Harry. And I also liked how you made him think that Peter and Sirius were dead and that's why Voldemort was there. He didn't just see Voldemort and know that Peter sold them out. It's, different, and I like good differences. Is this review long enough for your liking? I'll be waiting and watching for the next chapter. |
bumblebuzz chapter 1 . 5/24/2005 wow - pretty intense start. i loved the harry/james interaction - so cute! you've roped me in, now I wanna see how James comes back, and if he gets harry, and all that! |
american-born-confused-desi chapter 1 . 5/23/2005 yay! soo sad, first part is cute! |
Destany Mitchell chapter 1 . 5/23/2005 oo, please continue. |
0Rii chapter 1 . 5/23/2005 Wow. You're a really good writer. And you value what's right as far as reviews go, constructive criticism. You added a lot of life to the old over written night Lily and James died plot and I'm looking forwards to your next update. I'm sorry, but I can't find anything to criticize here. Usually I chew people out for grammar and the like but you're story doesn't need me to. Again, wonderful, wonderful job. ~Silver |
Rumoi chapter 1 . 5/22/2005 Wow. This is the first time I've read a "James-comes-back-to-life-fic" (even if it's only the first chap) and I think this is awesome! I loved the conversations between James and Harry and, well, everything else about the story. Keep on writing! |