5 chapters of absolutely nothing, except a james pity party...didn't he notice that there was no grave or headstone for Harry?

i've read quite a few james-is-alive-again stories and always thought most of their chapters on james meeting harry are not quite how it should be - but this story, this is brilliant. their meeting is so tender and beautiful. really really well done.

Excellent story; your writing style and word choice is phenomenal. Please write a sequel to this sometime!

I loved how you portrayed the dynamics of Sirius, James and Remus.

Fantastic!

Utterly fantastic! I honestly don't think the Dursley encounter was truly neccessary though... But it does make a nice ending.

This was supposed to be a more upbeat chapter? Remus's timidity made me want to retch. And he was already on probation with me.

James acted surprisingly wimpy for an auror in this fight. He had a couple of brilliant moves, but overall it was a very poor performance. His focus was abysmal. I thought Voldemort levitating his wand and then using it like a muggle arrow was very out of character for any wizard, and yet James failed to take advantage of that stupidity. Also, weren't most of the other people in the house supposed to be magical? Not one of the defenders drew a wand. And Mrs. Boyle was ridiculously slow on the uptake. When characters act that stupid they deserve to die.

Last chapter Remus was acting more wimpy than I've ever seen him as well, insisting he "can't" guard Harry. Are all the folks on the light side going to be wimps? If so, I should stop reading right now.

How could you possibly let Snape get away with saying "It wasn't my fault." If he didn't goad Remus mercilessly, who did? Like you say, it was a short chapter; plenty of space for Dumbledore to ream Snape a new orifice where he sits.

If you're going to have characters talk as poorly as Percy did, it doesn't make sense to have Bill act like he understands him, and then put the translation in an author note. Instead, have Bill question what Percy said by echoing his best guess back to him, that way we all understand without the need for author notes.

the only one I've read where james comes back is when voldemort is posessing him and trying to kill harry.

BAD QUALITY! I waited 10 Chapters! why haven they met!

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