Reviews for Beacon
zeynel chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
interesting... Very interesting!
MARYYYY chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
""It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer.""

NOTHING can be improved...DAMN Lindsay...this is some amazing...SHIT! I love the way you write...I love the descriptive language...makes me feel right in with the much so that my brother came in the room and I said "shush Clark" lol keep writing man!
The Tribble Master chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
That's interesting..but ew! ew! lionel rapes his own daughter? THAT BASTARD! God! How could he ! Argh! Okay, i like this story,it is well written. uh,would you mind if I used the Lex as a girl conncept for annother one of my whached storys? Anyway, WRITE ON!