|Reviews for You Kissed a Synthodrone?|
| Delia Anole chapter 11 . 10/15/2010
Cute. Sweet. Confusing. Tiring. Sad. Weird. Insane. Adorable. Lovely. Embarrasing. Humorous. Inspiring. And well thought out.
Favorite line:" "...I don't think I'm ever going to be able to tell her just how awfully stupid I felt not being able to tell the difference between her and you..." " Gee, Ron... Once again, wrong girl!
I have a whole new look on the tv show, I'll tell you. It's weird... Those two together... But, hey, I know they end up working out!
Interesting ending. Almost happy, not entirely, but almost. You could have almost created a sequel. If you wanted to, of course.
Well, congradulations! This was really, really good! I enjoyed it alot! And it was very funny! You did the fighting scenes better, I could tell you grew in that area... You did the humor great... And, you changed my perspectives a bit. And, after all, isn't that what writing is all about?
| Delia Anole chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Uh-oh. Oh no! This is awful! But, I am sure everythign will work out. Ron saved teh day, aftera ll... I just wonder how Kim will react. FInally Ron got some pants and decided to save the day! Kim'll have to be impressed, I hope.
Favorite Line: "You didn't just ignore the people you… loved."
Cute... Ridiculous and absurd.
Your fighting scenes were beautiful, and I can see them getting better. Great job.
| Delia Anole chapter 9 . 10/15/2010
Favorite Line: ""All right!" Monique, still tied up. Kim had forgotten about her. "This is better than a soap opera!""
Perhaps rudely placed in the scene, but an okay comedy relief.
Gee, this was dramatic. I never exepcted Ron to confess his love to Kim! He was so brave.
I'm sorry, but what Shego said... Some of those things were OOC. I doubt she would ever call Ron cute... The ending was definately Shego! And, you do a very good Drakken!
| Delia Anole chapter 8 . 10/15/2010
Awkward drama! But, good. They need to spew their feelings out before anything can clear up. I'm glad you recognized this.
Favorite line: ""Barely." It felt weird just talking. "I think your carpet is poisonous.""
Wow... Random humor. I'm amazed you managed to find anything humorous in this chapter! You are truly brilliant to use carpet for humor! So, bravo!
| Delia Anole chapter 7 . 10/15/2010
Ooh! I forgot to finish the story, but I have returned!
Favorite line: "He was upset. He was really upset. And it was all her fault. "Ron, I'm sorry.""
I mean, so waht? He'd get over it. Yet, she worries... More than a normal friend would. Oh, Kimmy, are you falling for Ron?
I liked the scene where she found him alot stronger than herself. I always wondered why Kim would settle for someone weak. Poor explanation on there part.
Love the plot!
| Delia Anole chapter 6 . 7/28/2010
Wow. Poor Monique. Shocked into oblivion. WEll, at least that is one more person on the Kim side.
GREIF! That was the funniest restaruant insanity EVER! I love how insane she got over a little bit of food. Why on Earth would that other girl get so mad? You'd think she could control herself a little bit, at least.
Favorite Line: "Not that you didn't have the whole playful abuse thing going on, but that works with guys of his mental capacity."
Dearest Ron, you are a baboon. Mwahahaaa!
| Delia Anole chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
This is so weird.
Favorite Line: ""Yes, Kim, I'm hiring you for a mission." Somewhere below hell freezed over"
Now Shego is on Kim's side. This is total division.
Wade, Kim, Shego vs. Drakken, 993, Ron
Technically all of Kim's family are on the opposite side too. And Monique. Weird.
| Delia Anole chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
favorite line:"He was indeed the Ron-man. He made the ladies fall to their knees. Why wouldn't it be unreasonable that Kim wouldn't get a little dilarious?"
ACK! That is so wrong, on SO MANY levels! ACK!
Ugh... Still shaking in horror from that amusing line...
Okay. Where is Rufus? He hasn't put his one cents into this yet! It is incomplete!
Anyways, at least Kim has someone on her team on her side. Though, you have made it so that the team is divided. That is hahahilarious! I love watching their agony! Or... Err.. Reading.
| Delia Anole chapter 3 . 7/28/2010
GASP! That was so confusingly delicious! Ron thinks the copy is... THe original. The original is the ocpy and... Oh MAN!
Favorite Line: " He hadn't gone to school on a Saturday since... well, three months ago. But it was still a rare occurrence"
Rare? How rare? He fails miserably! I've never done that! Oh dear Ron, you are so ignorant and... No other words to describe him.
You write a very well Ron! He is a complete idiot even here!
| Delia Anole chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
My favorite line: All these years and that nice Ronald kid had turned out to be a guy.
Mwahahaaahaaa! So hilarious!
So, Kim did break out without the help of others. I'm curious to see how the other chapters are filled, considering that she is free now.
You really made synthodrone whatever numbers alot like Kim. That is so cool! You made her like a real person! I like the malfuctioning of guys being cute. Really funny!
Kim's dad is hilarious in this section! I'm sure you knew this, considering that he had my favorite line for this chapter!
| Delia Anole chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
AW! Poor Ron! Poor Ron! I could never imagine that this happened! Poor Ron!
Line I loved the most: "Several others were added to her mentallist of people to kill."
I like this so far! The rotation of one view point to the next! Kim locked up, Ron sure that his BFF loves him, and Shego more furious than ever before. Plus, Drakken with donut frosting on his chin! I am not sure I will EVER get that image out of my head!
I'm sure Kim will escape somehow, but will Ron be the one to save her? And what will happen with their relationship? Those are the questions that haunt my mind. Because, I don't know the answers! In the series it was made obvious they would end up together... But... You are no stupid TV show writer... You have your own plots in mind...
| nekoken chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Man that would just be like Drakken to have his own sythodrone stop his plans lol.
| Joe Stoppinghem chapter 11 . 4/19/2010
Fake Kim indeed!
Great story, sorry I didn't leave a review for every chapter for it certainly deserved it.
I don't know why it didn't occur to me to check out your other works. Your writing and imagination will always impress me.
Thanks for all that you have given to this group and hope to read more of the 'Envying Monte Cristo" in the future.
| Phoenix Soar chapter 11 . 1/7/2010
Dang, this was just so awesomely sweet! I loved every moment of it.
And I think you did a very believable job of having Kim switched with a synthodrone and the whole mess that followed. Some parts were a little predictable, but the whole fic is very well-written and held my interest the whole way, so kudos to you!
| Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 11 . 5/30/2008
Now THAT’S what I’m talking about!
Just when you think ‘So the Drama’ can’t get better, you get something like this; Drakken’s synthodrone-related plans go even FURTHER than just trying to get Kim off-balance with a new fake boyfriend, leaving Kim having a serious identity crisis as she tries to clarify which one of her is real while the synthodrone’s left torn between her programming and her own feelings.
You have to wonder what that says about Drakken, really; his greatest scheme’s so good that it doesn’t work at all (In that Synthodrone 993’s so effective at being Kim Possible that it actually starts to BE Kim).
Still, that’s life, I suppose; things never QUITE work out the way you expect them to.
On the topic of the Synthodrone, the parts told from 993’s point of view were very effective, providing us with a very intriguing perspective on her as her initially Kim-based persona combines with her artificial nature to leave her with some very distinct differences from her ‘template’ (Although I thought the bit where she freaked out about the naco was a bit over-the-top; surely synthodrones just wouldn’t have been able to taste anything in the first place?)
Plus, of course, the various moments where Ron thinks that Kim’s the synthodrone or the synthodrone’s Kim were just BRILLIANT; not only do we have the humour value of Ron freaking out when confronted by Kim and Shego and assuming it’s the fake, but we also have the emotional power factor of Ron’s big speech at the end, when he admits to Kim- albeit thinking that she’s the synthodrone- that he’s loved her since long before Eric even showed up on the scene, and Kim FINALLY deciding to cut through the crap and just kiss the one guy who’s always been there for her.
In some ways, this is FAR better than the ACTUAL ‘So the Drama’; not only do we get a bit more in-depth analysis of Kim and Ron’s emotions over this shift in their relationship- made even more difficult than it would have been by the synthodrone-, but we also have the ever-enjoyable sight of the hero fighting herself.
What can I say? I’ve always been a sucker for the evil twin thing…
Anyway, keep up the good work!