Reviews for Soragakure, The Hidden Village of Sky
ninofchaos chapter 4 . 6/28/2005
update soon
ninofchaos chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
i really like this chapter. there are a few spelling errors although they can be overlooked
Resurgam-Csillaga chapter 4 . 6/28/2005
hmm most running away fics are the same but having young naruto interact with merchants rather then children is kinda... well actually way better. plus kyu doesn't sound soo erm. friendly seen in most fics yah.

Hope to read chapter 5 when it comes out yah
KunochiDreamer chapter 4 . 6/28/2005
Nice chapter.
Toki Mirage chapter 4 . 6/28/2005
YEA! GO NARUTO! SO GLAD he's finally leaving! *grin* can't wait for your next chapter, so PLEASE update soon!
firecaster-hikaru chapter 3 . 6/24/2005
is it not possible to use chaka for weight? from some of the stories that i have read, it really sounds possible.
RandomKleenex chapter 3 . 6/21/2005

I really hope you continue, 'cause this story RULES!
Delusional Fishies chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
original... Let's see how this goes.
monkeycrunch88 chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
YAY! i thought you'd given up, great chapter, please update again soon.
KunochiDreamer chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
Interesting fic you have here.
aaa chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
maxhrk chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
Hello your chapter is great...

I dunno about pairing if you take it to Naruto to create Soragakure

I assume pairing would be Temari or OC mostly. I pefer OC will do heh...

oh well it is up to you...

I have seen alot of common naru/saku, hin, and other that i forgot about.. so i hope it will be different haha.

I have only sightly problem.. you forgot to Bold most of Kyuubi's telepathly voice to BOLD by the way. I hope you can fix that error. :)
Toki Mirage chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
Like the story idea! Update soon please?
Toki Mirage chapter 2 . 5/26/2005
UPDATE SOON! I like this idea, but can we get some action in soon? It might get boring if you write training day by day.
Starjacker chapter 2 . 5/25/2005
This should be very challenging for naruto to pull off. I still don't get how the villagers could only see kyuubi and not naruto. They are either complete morons or just stupid jackasses. The bloodlines will definitely help the new village and the people with the bloodlines will have a safe haven. Keep it up and update soon!
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