Reviews for Bird in a Cage
Diamondstar the Seeker chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Ironhide, your evil, I think you should go with the cons, cause they only do that to their perioners.
moonlight-nekomata chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
you wrote an awesome story but i think you shold continue it. please continueit or atleast make asequel that showes exactlly how much damage was done when he gets captured the next time.
mooncrossed chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This is really good. Sensory deprivation coupled with claustrophobia? Shudder. Hope Jazz can help him recover from his experience.
deeed chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I would love to hear the end of this. I've not come across a story from this angle before. Starscream's claustrophobia might have been mildly touched on before but never like this. Nor have I ever seen any real SS and Jazz interaction. It's been written so wonderfully so far and the characterisations are spot on to how I imagine them. Please finish!
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
raises eyebrow I take it you never found the time to finish this.

It was good, though, even without having anything further. _

. . . I may, at some point, find some initiative to write myself an ending to this. It has too much potential to be left as is, in my opinion. If I do, I'll give you a heads-up. ;)

Don't expect it soon, though. lol

(Random note: Very impressive work for being written in an hour at 2:30 am...)
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
Poor Screamer...

Cut off from his beloved sky, and buried under the ground none the less.

Flyers aren't meant to be underground.

*hugs Starscream*

Sh...

It's okay, baby.

You'll be out of here before you know, back into the open sky and soaring up where not even the birds can touch you.

Back where you belong...

-

Update soon, or I'll sic my army stuffed animals armed with kitchen on you.
Kittona chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
you're not gonna leave it there are you? please finish it!
Atiaran chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
This is an excellent first chapter. I wish you'd consider going on with this. Starscream's desperation at being trapped under the ground and his feverish hoping that someone will come and bail him out are well-drawn and believable, and it's also believable that Jazz would be concerned for him in this way. I wonder what Prime himself thinks of locking Starscream up like this, given that it is clearly having such detrimental effects on his psyche. Well-done.
oddstick chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
You portray Starscream's emotional and mental anquish very well. I really hope to see more of this in the future!
Taipan Kiryu chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Hi. I came into your story and I really loved it. I see that you havent updated in a while, please please do so! There are many people here that want to know what happens! Please have mercy.
AyameKitsune chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Are you gonna update?
WallPhantom chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Are you going to continue? I hope so.

This is wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. _
Lada chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Please, continue! It's one of my faves, I'd love to find out about Oh The Mighty Screaming One's reaction to Jazz's compassion :-)
Decepitcon project XD chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
plz complete this it is very good but poor starscream dont let him go insane (like megatron)
Lady Shockbox chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Shockbox: (stares at the end of th chapter) You are VERY evil... (shoves popcorn into her mouth) Update soon, please! Thsi fic is too good to just end.

Starscream: (looks up at the monitor) I hate you all!

Shockbox: (throws popcorn at the screen) Shudup! (sees popcorn all over the floor and glances over at Frenzy and Rumble)

Frenzy: (raises and optic ridge) If you think were gonna start a fight about-

Rumble: (snaps) It's mine!

Shockbox: (hisses and lunges at popcorn as the two duke it out over the puffy pale snack of deliciousness)

Frenzy: (anime sweatdrop) Geez, overkill if you ask me. (shakes his head) Update soon!
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