Looks interesting

:)

I FOUND YOU! I've been reading your stories since I was twelve! I thought you died or well quite writing. You haven't updated your sight or your yahoo group since 2003 and I just kept coming back to see if you were there. I love your work and I truely enjoy reading your take on Cloud's instabilities. I don't particularly enjoy reading the redux though. It felt like some of the color or character/reader connection wasn't really there which is why I love the fact that this is on here too! I hope you continue to write wonderful stories!

Sincerly,

a long time fan- Kyatia

Damn but you write one hell of a story! The careful development of Cloud's character has been brilliant. The uneasy truce between the various characters is also fantastic.

Tracyboo

you've got me on the edge of my seat with this story. Great plot and character development.

Tracyboo

Kinky, huh? Hmm. Didn't read it. ; Been skipping the side-stories. I should probably ask if Redux would be considered "kinky" at any point?

Hmm, just got your note. Abandoned, you say? Shame. I've enjoyed the alternate personality and psychology you've built (rather well imo) in both Cloud and Sephiroth. Not to mention that Zack is my favorite character and Good Sephiroth comes in about third or fourth. ;

Again, my biggest problem is the language. I feel that a lot of the usage is excessive and distracting.

Also, I noticed you rated your other story a "T" but also an "R". I always figured that K G, K PG, T PG-13 and M R. Would you say the sexual and violent content would be the equivalent of this story? Worse? Better? And how about the language content?

Okay, I realize you put this up before Advent Children, Crisis Core and Before Crisis came out. With that said, I really like what you're doing with it. I always wondered exactly HOW Cloud got all of Zack's memories, and I think it would be interesting to see things from Zack's POV inside Cloud's head.

That said, I find this really confusing as to how quickly it changes points of view. A simple xXx o between points of view would make this MUCH easier to follow.

Also, thank you for the warning about the language. I don't care for language, and would prefer not to read it (as I find it distracting), but the warning helped so it didn't distract so much. Thanks.

AHH YOU UPDATED! (goes over to LJ)

MH-sama! You're working on COI again? Joyous day~ XD ~dances~ Heading over to your lj now~

One of the best FF7 fanfics I've ever read. It has the dark theme and has such realistic character developments that draws you in and makes you bang your head into something once you know it hasn't been updated in years. (I've just stalked your LJ and read every single drabble until I had to go to sleep at 3 AM and wake up just to continue reading it again.)

Do update soon on your LJ! Part 8 has been sitting incomplete for years.

I FINDS IT! Sorry, I read this like a year ago and liked it, only to never find it whenever I looked for it. Lo and behold, I run across it while browsing...the world is weird.

Ah loves Zack!

I just started this and it is very interesting. Can't wait to finish it!

I had read this fic WAYY back when it was being updated on your site.I thought you dropped it , and I honestly stopped reading fiction for aLONG time. But I picked it up again and during my search i stumbled upon this story again! I cant WAIT to read it. Of course im gonna have to read itall over again since its been YEARS but im so gald youre still sticking to this story! I have to say I admire that, and thank you finding this story is a plesant surprise!

i feel stupid saying this but i have no idea how to use Livejournal _

on another note, this story rocks, so does all ya others _ hope ya might thik about updating again here or on ya website