Reviews for Breathe
Cutter12 chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
This little story adds to the episode nicely.
Jenn1984 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
I thought this was great. I'm always on the lookout for tags to this episode and sadly there aren't many.

The "In. Out. In. Out." in this story was brilliant. I loved the idea of Don's need to see Charlie still breathing after what had happened, and I love how the 'in out' tells us this.

Your writing is lovely, too. I like your choice of words, your descriptions. You don't go overboard, it's very simple and effective. My favorite kind of writing, to be honest. I love simple, beautiful stories.

Thanks for the tag. I was happy to stumble upon it after looking so hard for tags to this ep.
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
that was good loved it
Jazmingirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
wow great story I love hos protective Don is of his baby brother
Selene467 chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Yay another great one-shot about that amazing episode. Love it! Very nice!
SaJi chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
I loved the kind of simple emotional feel to this peice. Very well done me thinks.
thebondgirl chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
:)great one-shot!:) keep up the great work!:)
Charlie Quill chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Oh, chilling.

CQ
graceofnight chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
beautiful and lyrical. a very poetic post-Sniper Zero bit. a lovely moment between the brothers.
Bloodsuckers37 chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Ew...Totally awesome! Love it!
SUSANB chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
This is one of the sweetest things I have read.

It shows a bond between the Boys the show

really does not explore. Thankyou,Susan
Julie Poe chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
Really good! Please keep 'em coming, I love your stories
Ecri chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Excellent! Well done! I love that peek into Don's thoughts as he contemplates what might have happened. Great job!
Igiveup chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Good story. I thought Don might have been more upset by the shooting than he let on.
A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Very nice story. Gently written and I love the uncertainty at the end.

Thanks for sharing,

Emily
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