|Reviews for Irrevocable|
| FollowThisRhythm chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Oh, this was awful - but of course, when I say awful, I mean devastating and emotive. What's truly awful is how I feel now after finishing it, because I hoped, so hoped, that the ending would be one that gave the chance for even the smallest happiness or hope, but I knew, almost immediately when I started reading, what it was I should have expected. Still, even with my assumptions, and even with my *conviction* in my assumptions, I was brought to tears around the halfway point, and they continued until the end.
This was (utterly, terribly) heartbreaking, but this was undeniably beautiful, too. Your writing style, your portrayals (not only of the characters, but of their EMOTIONS), their conversation at the Lost Woods, how Link knew of her feelings, Zelda's constant struggle, just some of the *words* in here (how you used them and where they were placed, et cetera) - all were shatteringly, painfully lovely.
Anyway, thank you for writing and sharing this. Truthfully, this isn't in the least bit how I want to imagine their story turning out (my heart can't settle for anything less than a happy ending, I'm afraid, regardless of how likely that may or may not be) but I'm happy that I was able to come across this all the same; I normally avoid tragedy, but this was a (very worthwhile) exception.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
| stickdude chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Wow. That was awesome. The writing was perfect and Link and Zelda aren't OCC at all. But it might have been better if they ended up together. I have one last question though: Did Zelda die at the end? It isn't clear.
| SailorMeowMeow chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Noooooooooo! Link! Why!
I liked it very much .
| Hidari chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
It nicely written but I think she gave up on him too fast.
| embyr-75 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
...I liked it but I didn't. I mean it was written well. But. OH you know darn well what I'm talking about. Don't give me that innocent look. Good job though. At making my life MISERABLE! XD
| readeradv chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
That is sad...
| Narcissa Montparnasse chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
that made me cry...
| trevor19 chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Wow! Superb writing. Sad ending too! Great work.
| blaahblaah chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Waah. That was so sad! You are great at writing, and they were SO in-character. You did great, so I give you a...9 out of 10. I would have given you a 10 if it was longer...lol. Just kidding. 10/10
| Sambev chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews. It's a very good idea, and very well written. It's hard to give dialouge to Link becuase no one really knows what he would say, but I think you did a great job.
| Krissy chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Omg that was so sad! i wouldn't change anything about it. it was perfect!
| ElvenGoddess chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I loved your story! it was sad but good.
| James Milamber chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Oi! That's my title you nicked! Although you forgot the (Where's that damn nuke?) bit...
Interesting story, anywho. I never really thought about what would happen after Link was sent back at the end of Ocarina of Time...or what would happen to Zelda. I wonder what would happen if he went and retrieved the Master Sword...*ponders*
| Dysteria2008 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
that was so sad. it was so beautiful but so sad. can you do one more but this time in link's pov? with as much zelink as possible of course.