Reviews for At the edge of the ocean |
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![]() ![]() your story is very interesting and i cant wait for next hurry to continue this. |
![]() ![]() I re-read this a couple weeks ago. It remains my #1 "I wish I knew what happened next" story. I just love a Naruto story with a good plot. All the wonderful details really make it stand out (glass kunais, blood-acid jutsu, etc.). Excellent grammar and flow: these make it a pleasure to read. Just wanted to say thank you for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gorgeous set of stories. I particularly like the first one, especially the erotic cheesecakes and Iruka trying to make Kakashi walk into the pole... there are just so many lovely little touches that make it so rich. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! Will there be any more after chap5? Hope so! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! I originally found it on the Fleeting Fancies rec site, but now I've decided to review. You didn't lose me on the paper-interrogation device, I actually thought it was really clever. Wish I was that smart...Anyway, I also have a question. Are you going to be making this a KakashixIruka story? because I really love that pairing (KakashixIruka love forever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. This chapter has been my favourite so far. I'm immediatly putting you on my fav author list. Are you going to carry on with this story or is this it? and will you ever go into more detail with what Iruka and Kabuto were talking about? And why didn't Iruka want kakashi to see the scar on his back? Saint |
![]() ![]() Wow! this is really good so far! You should update again soon, I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to say, I quite enjoyed this and hope you update it again, eventually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Iruka! Nice job stealing a uniform and scaring them into doing what he wanted. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() impressive1! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovelovelove this SO much. It is a fascinating story, and I'm enjoying it quite a bit. I love how Iruka is so in character, and how you enhance and augment what's already there. He's not perfect, not at all, but he's not weak and willing to be pushed around. Very nice job! I hope you update sometime, I really want to find out what the glass kunai are for! Kudos on an awesome story |
![]() ![]() very much into the plot. love the characterizations! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So while i want to say that i think you let Iruka get past Kabuto a bit too easily, i'm willing to make excuses for him as 1. kabuto was probably underestimating Iruka, and 2. If Iruka was Kabuto's teacher way back in the day, then he probably knows, just a bit, about what Kabuto's elementary weaknesses were, even if he tried to hide them. Yeah, yeah! Also, i really like the way you portray Iruka, and the way you write Kakashi and Iruka together. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is really interesting! I like your characterisation. Please write more. _~ CDW |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cool, write more. |