| Reviews for At the edge of the ocean |
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   LadytehMa chapter 4 . 7/17/2005 This is a thoughtful, perceptive fic. An absolute delight of a find; worth wading through the angsty teen fics to find. |
| Nezuko chapter 5 . 7/17/2005 Oh. My. God. So intense! Gripping. Completely enthralling. I can't do this justice. The jutsus were excellent. Iruka kicks some major ass! Damn! And his interaction with Kabuto was so perfect -honong in what must be an actual weak spot for kabuto - how else to explain his reaction. I almost can't stand to wait to find out what happens next, But of course, I must. |
| burning-out-fast chapter 5 . 7/16/2005 that made me smile at the end i loved how you portray iruka and his relationships and personality it's just amazingly well done realistic and perfectly fitting the character please write more soon i love this story |
| Smoking Panda chapter 5 . 7/16/2005 Another great chapter! I really enjoyed it! - And I must apologize for the comment on the last chapter...I ment no offense of course, and am afraid that what I ment to say was twisted by my horrid wording...and the fact that the keyboard I was typing on sucks and does not compute half the things I type :P I wanted to congradulate you on how "LESS-MarySue-ish" it seems. Most stories make Iruka seem so god damn sissy-ish and like to see Iruka with a bit more of that infallible, stubborn teenager in him. Iruka is my favoite character in Naruto (though the lack of him upsets me) I love to see him in a varity of stories. Yours is one of my absolute favorites so I'd LOVE to see more of this story in the future. - |
| shadow dragonia chapter 4 . 7/8/2005 OMG! That was such a cute story. I LOVE Iruka-sensei, thank you so much for writting this, lol. _ |
| Erixil chapter 4 . 7/7/2005 This was awesome! We need more good Iruka fanfiction out there! |
| JadeDragoness chapter 1 . 7/7/2005 Wow. Great stories. I seriously like how in charater Iruka seems to be. Gah. I can't wait to read more. This is so going on my fave list. |
| Fractured Dreams chapter 4 . 6/28/2005 good chapter...i really liked the ending...the last two lines were my favorite!(how sad...i really have too much time on my hands!) neways, great work! write some more! soon!:) |
| Iridys chapter 1 . 6/27/2005 Oh, this was great, expecially the part where Iruka tries to steer Kakashi into the lamppost. You really portray Iruka wonderfully. Nice and very in character with what we've seen in the manga, but still no pushover. |
| Iridys chapter 4 . 6/27/2005 This is fascinating. I don't think I've ever read anyone portray Iruka so well; not very powerful, but incredibly resourceful. And I'm pretty sure I've read just about every KakaIru out there. |
| firedraygon chapter 4 . 6/23/2005 W00t! Go Iruka. XD People like Katsura piss me the hell off, heh. Please write more soon! This story is fun. ~fd97 |
| Smoking Panda chapter 4 . 6/17/2005 WOW! I love Iruka's character in this story! Sometimes he comes off like a total Mary-Sue, but i love it when he has a vivious side...Please write more! i love reading Iruka-stories...- |
| burning-out-fast chapter 4 . 6/12/2005 man i love your story. everythings great but im confused what did ibiki make iruka do could you explain pls. and update very very son i love this story |
| Monna Sakura chapter 4 . 6/11/2005 Iruka-sensei is so kickass! Wahahaha! This one was particularly good, as it drew about 5 different emotions out of me.. XD Anyway, I eagerly anticipate the next installment. Update when you can! (OH, and Katsura's degradating tone just pissed me right off... *grumblegrumble*) |
| Chibi-akuma-no-kage chapter 4 . 6/7/2005 I love this story _ it's a very interesting point of view on Iruka and i can't wait to read more. |